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By Deathmare

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: TheDeathmare#0776
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I had to put it in Biography.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I had to put it in Biography.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

*Puts a slight smile on his face, seeing kindness of the gentlemen*

“Thanks for the welcome, I was just looking around the city. When I came upon this market. Do you work here?”

Character Name: Asgrim
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 48
Physical Description: Body-build - Weak,Skinny
Weight - 6'1
Weight - 160 lbs
Facial hair color - White/A bit blonde too
Eye color - Black
Attire - Black cape/hood
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Amelica

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you can’t figure out what more to add, here are some questions you can ask yourself: what is your character afraid of? How do they act around strangers? What is their resting disposition?

  • Your Physical Description is inconsistent with your character’s race. Please visit the wiki page for said race and read about the acceptable physical attributes.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please find one that matches. Alternatively, you may correct your physical description so it matches the skin you use.

 

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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