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Varian
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: idk
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: idk
    Status: Denied

i come for adventure


Character Name: varian
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: blue clothes
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

 

→ Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

→ Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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