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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: useing info from ooc in character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: character doing something you couldnt do irl
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Kerchu Shakala
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 200
Physical Description: he is a very strong 6'7" man who is a target of women and he is very wealthy and smart.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

-Your powergaming and metagaming definitions aren’t quite what I’m looking for,, please edit and correct these, making sure to include an example for each! Here are the links to the correct definitions, just make sure to write them in your own words and not to plagiarise! ❤️

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

- Your bio is quite short,, if you could extend it to around 6-7 sentences that would be wonderful! ❤️

- Your bio states that your character is looking to participate in the war between the humans and elves? As far as I can tell, there isn’t currently such a war,, you might be referring to the recent war of the two emperors, however that was between human nations with each side having elven allies, and has now just ended. Here is a link to the wiki, you might find it helpful in looking for a correct/different lore reference! ❤️

WIKI

- This isn’t absolute, yet I would always advise picking a subrace for your elf, unless they are a mix. It helps to add some culture and backstory to your character ? Your character seems to have white hair and pale skin, along with heterochromic eyes, possibly making them a high elf/snow elf, or especially regarding the heterochromia, a mix of elven subraces. I suggest looking into elven lore on the wiki ❤️

- Mm, your character’s skin doesn’t seem to quite fit the standard,, it seems very modern, and has.. cat ears? It seems a little odd to me.. Please do change this to fit standards (removing cat ears, making it less modern), you might find this editor helpful with that. I also advise looking to the LotC Skin Archive, it’s always very useful as skins there are free to use – you can use, reference or edit any of those skins to fit your character ?

https://www.minecraftskins.com/skin-editor/

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/

- Your character description says that your character is a ‘target of women’,, I wouldn’t advise putting this, as I’m afraid you will likely be disappointed. It also says that your character is wealthy - while they might have grown up in a moderately wealthy family, just a note that when you join the server you will have to gain money yourself~~

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed in the Pending message above! ❤️

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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