TheShepherd5

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

For reasons such as:

Ø Your powergaming definition is incorrect, please review it here.

Ø Please add a bit more content/length to your biography. It’s recommended that it’s atleast 5-7 well made, complete sentences, forming a mid sized paragraph. Ideas for what to add could be: More detail about your childhood/teenager years, a event that affected your life or early adult years. It is not mean’t to be a one liner, keep in mind spelling and grammar when improving it! ?

Ø Your lore references require to be a bit more then just naming off a race and a nation (Note I said nation), that accordance with your persona’s age of 35 and the current year of 1724. Some other examples of what you can use for lore references are: important lore events (Ex. World End events), City names (Cities have names, their not just the nation) and religions. Some things you can look at are:
Humans

Holy Orenian Empire (Be extremely careful around this one, as there’s been many across the years).

Haense

Helena (Note in accordance with our timeline & your age, you cannot be from here, nor any city on Arcas, as we’ve only been on here for 19 years)

Ves (Some ruling here as Helena)

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Please PM me on the forums if you want a invite. Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns

I have edited it I tried my best

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

For reasons such as:

Ø You require to define it and give an example, of powergaming

Ø Please add a bit more content/length to your biography. It’s recommended that it’s atleast 5-7 well made, complete sentences, forming a mid sized paragraph. Ideas for what to add could be: More detail about your childhood/teenager years, a event that affected your life or early adult years. Take a look at accepted apps for an idea of length.

Ø Your lore references require to be a bit more then just naming off a race and in  accordance with your persona’s age of 35 and the current year of 1724. Some other examples of what you can use for lore references are: important lore events (Ex. World End events), City names (Cities have names, their not just the nation) and religions. Some things you can look at are:
Humans

Holy Orenian Empire (Be extremely careful around this one, as there’s been many across the years).

Haense

Helena (Note in accordance with our timeline & your age, you cannot be from here, nor any city on Arcas, as we’ve only been on here for 19 years)

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Please PM me on the forums if you want a invite. Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns

Your application has been

 Due to: Your 24 hours period is up, please make the following changes before repplying

Ø You require to define it and give an example, of powergaming

Ø Please add a bit more content/length to your biography. It’s recommended that it’s atleast 5-7 well made, complete sentences, forming a mid sized paragraph. Ideas for what to add could be: More detail about your childhood/teenager years, a event that affected your life or early adult years. Take a look at accepted apps for an idea of length.

Ø Your lore references require to be a bit more then just naming off a race and in  accordance with your persona’s age of 35 and the current year of 1724. Some other examples of what you can use for lore references are: important lore events (Ex. World End events), City names (Cities have names, their not just the nation) and religions. Some things you can look at are:
Humans

Holy Orenian Empire (Be extremely careful around this one, as there’s been many across the years).

Haense

Helena (Note in accordance with our timeline & your age, you cannot be from here, nor any city on Arcas, as we’ve only been on here for 19 years)

You may reapply in whenever.

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire#0044), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire)