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By Just4TheHalibut

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Just4thehalibut#5476
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Use of real-life knowledge ina video game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: trying to reach a goal through a video game
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

"I have arrived looking for adventure." Hagrid boomed. 
Hagrid ripped his ax from his back and flashed it in front of the well dressed gentleman. Hagrid's flashy Armor revealed itself and the trophies he had collected from his past adventures. the Gentleman stepped aside and showed him to the tavern.

Character Name: Hagrid The Brave
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Small very strong and brave
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your character must become a knight in roleplay first so I recommend amending this part of your Character Biography.

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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