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Wano
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Wano#9181
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is information that you ingame a character couldn't obtain normally.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making your character strong to the point where no one can harm you.
    Status: Denied

He would reply "Hello! I've came here for citizenship of this lovely city and wish to set up a market and own a house! Would you mind showing me around?".


Character Name: Wano
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Wano is 6'4, has brown eyes, and dark brown hair. He has a very athletic build and 185 pounds. A heavy helmet passed on from his father, and armor
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  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with their biography!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your biography, character Like/Fear/Dislike/Etc. are all written under ‘My character…” Please write in third person! In example, ‘Alison loves to spend her free time reading.”

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Your application has been denied at this time due to insufficient edits within the 24 hour timeframe. Please do refer to the pending post above for the edits. Feel free to apply again at any time! if you've any questions regarding this decision, please do not hesitate to contact me via. Forums or Discord @ Mingo#2467

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