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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Legion#0034
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you "attempt to chop someones head off" ps follow the changes of world and things
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: for example : aiden swings his sword and chopes someones head not even rping
    Status: Denied

Hello my friend. adventure of course im the great adventurer who wants to explore more “aiden smiles”  woud you like to give me a quick trip to this lovely city “Aiden nods the head and looks around” (after the quick trip) thanks the stranger “in his mind he stills wondered who was dat stranger “


Character Name: Aiden Trealer
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: Aiden is owner of good phisical strenght tall and with muscles.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to having too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help      
     
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
     
  • Your character biography states that you killed multiple orcs within Oren. This can be considered powergaming. If this is your character’s background then make sure that it has legitimate lore references to back it up.
     
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 
     
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.    

     
  • The roleplay scenario has the quotation marks and emotes flipped. Please make sure that what your character says is in quotation marks, and what they do is between *


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @BreadStick#5363, and I recommend you join the Lord of The Craft Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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