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Voltaris
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: JADE_HIDE#3744
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: you have to like use knowledge obtained outside of roleplay.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: being unreasonably overpowered.
    Status: Denied

Voltaris: I come here for adventure... but i am willing for some of the famous beer that gives the city its fame, haha! 

Well dressed man: Haha! well, you've come to the right place! Say, just as a welcome gift, wanna have a round of beer? 

Voltaris: But i dont have mina-

Well dressed man: But of course, a welcome gift needs not any mina! just because its your first time, its on me!

Voltaris: well... who am i to say no to your wonderful gift!

Well dressed man: Haha! well, come along now, before the beer runs out!

 


Character Name: Voltaris
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: he is thin, has brown hair, full sleeve blue shirt with brown edges,brown wrists, brown boots, dark brown pants ,60kg, snow goggles on his forehead
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Character Biography states that your character’s parents were killed by orcs, please fix this accordingly! We no longer accept this trope due to how generic and used it is for the majority of applicants. Think of something else!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message VictoriaMinaj! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Vi#3544

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! 

Here’s the New Player hub!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord. 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is above 2665.png

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Vi#3544 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message VictoriaMinaj to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the WIKI !

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