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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: idk
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: idk
    Status: Denied

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Character Name: uscroth
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: heavy soldier of tribes
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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because you did not make the required corrections on time. Here is some feedback on what you should have fixed: 

 

  •  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding more detail. If you’re lost on what to add, consider describing things like height, eye colour, hair colour, and hair length.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you can’t figure out what more to add, here are some questions you can ask yourself: what is your character afraid of? How do they act around strangers? What is their resting disposition?

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must include dialogue in quotes to distinguish the speaking from the actions.
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application; I am having a difficult time understanding parts of it. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 


You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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