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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using out of game info to advantage in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: god mode, taking on charactaristics inconsistent with charactar
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surroundedd by quotes.


Character Name: Talia
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Very tall 4' 5'. Normal halfling build. light brown-ish hair with light brown eyes, red cape over one shoulder what seems like a fighters wear
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

 

I. Your Physical Description states that your character is 4’5” tall. Halflings can only be up to 3’0” tall, please fix this.

 

II. Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

III. Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

IV. Your app requires a Roleplay Scenario response. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

V. Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
https://app.grammarly.com/

 

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @UwUPlant#0017, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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