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Ø  Please improve your grammar and spelling across your application.

Ø  Your character cannot know any magic or have any powers. Once you have been whitelisted, you may attempt to find a magic teacher in game.

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø  Please expand your character biography. A character biography should be a brief history of your character’s life up to this point. You could include information such as where they were born, what their family was like and what they value/what motivates them.

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should usually be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour.

Ø  Your character description should only be used to describe the physical attributes of your character. Please edit this.

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

You haven’t made the necessary changes within the given timeframe.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

Ø  Please improve your grammar and spelling across your application.

Ø  Your character cannot know any magic or have any powers. Once you have been whitelisted, you may attempt to find a magic teacher in game.

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø  Please expand your character biography. A character biography should be a brief history of your character’s life up to this point. You could include information such as where they were born, what their family was like and what they value/what motivates them.

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should usually be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour.

Ø  Your character description should only be used to describe the physical attributes of your character. Please edit this.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.