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HyperionTheTitan
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: XyperionA#8016
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: meta gaming is the use of knowledge out side of the character u play and the story currently going on
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: external information or some thing that benefits ur character making it un fair
    Status: Denied

i want wealth and all of it 


Character Name: Hyperion
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: 6ft 2 inches brown hair with a dark green eyes 77 kg and slightly muscular with toning slightly tanned
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Character Biography is partially written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person all the time while talking about your character!

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0

 

→ Please try to fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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