Younggoku20

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Hey, YoungGoku20! Your application has been set to... Pending!
 

Your application is very well-done and I'm glad to see the effort you've put into it.
There are a couple of things that need a little bit of tweaking though, and then you'll be completely ready for being accepted to Lord of the Craft!
 

To start things off...

Your Backstory is also far too short. It must be a minimum of five solid lines, if not a couple of paragraphs.
Including two lore references and detailing your character's life from birth until the present day would work best.

The Interesting Facts portion of your application is lacking a negative trait. Please change this to show one of your character's flaws before you continue!
Having more than just one character flaw is fine, too.

Your Character Description is lacking by just a smidgen; including various tidbits like hair colour, eye colour, their clothing, height, weight, and overall build would work splendidly!
Remember, you should be able to visualize the character when you close your eyes. If you can't, I likely won't be able to either!

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. Once you've managed to accomplish this, comment here or contact me as soon as possible. If you have any questions about my requests, send me a message here on the forums or send Rae#3015 a friend-request via Discord and we can talk!
If you log onto the server, you'll be able to message me as well by doing '/msg TheIchorDruid' followed by your question or talking in the Wandering Soul channel.
You do not have to make a new application to make these changes. Edit this one, please!
Failing to make these changes will result in an application denial, however, you can request additional time to work on the changes if you know you'll find yourself busy with something else.

If you'd like to see about getting help with anything else, related to your application or not, please join the New Player Discord!
https://discord.gg/KxA6EXT 

To simplify the process of joining LotC's community, here's a link to our New Player Guide. It elaborates on everything you could ever need for writing an application, doing commands in-game, understanding the chat channels, etc.
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide 

I'm sorry to say, but the allotted 24-hours are up and your application has been...

Though, don't worry! You can reapply immediately; I only ask that you submit this current application with the changes I requested. It'll undergo another review, whether by myself or another Community Team member, and we'll see if anything else needs changing!

If you have any questions, don't hesitate in contacting me here on the forums or via Discord by sending a friend request; Rae#3015

If you'd like to see about getting help with rewriting your application, please join the New Player Discord!
https://discord.gg/KxA6EXT