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    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you use information that your character in a role playing game wouldn't have. You are using meta knowledge. It's essentially cheating.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: in it's simplest form is the act of any character doing something they'd realistically be unable to do. In truth
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Slaugh Waruk
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 70
Physical Description: he is tall, strong, brown mow hawk, orange eyes
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Ø  Your powergaming definition does not match the server’s definition of powergaming. Please refer to our wiki page on Powergaming for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize).

 

Ø  Your character’s biography is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any important events that have happened to them.

 

Ø You must include at least one valid server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

 

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.

 

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character such as their hair colour, eye colour and any other distinguishing features. Please edit this.

 

Ø  While this is not necessary to change, I wanted to make sure that you are aware your character’s age means that they will be considered something like a child or adolescent in most elven cultures. Generally speaking, elves aren’t considered adults until they are at least 50 years old.

 

Ø  Your character’s name doesn’t really fit high elven culture. This is also not necessary to change however I would recommend that you take a look at the wiki page on high elves and look for some inspiration there. Try not to steal a name.


 

 

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

 

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.


 

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Ø  Your character’s biography should be about your character, not yourself.

 

Ø  Your character’s biography is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any important events that have happened to them.

 

Ø You must include at least one valid server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

 

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.

 

Ø  While this is not necessary to change, I wanted to make sure that you are aware your character’s age means that they will be considered something like a child or adolescent in most elven cultures. Generally speaking, elves aren’t considered adults until they are at least 50 years old.
 

 

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

 

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

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Ø  Your character’s biography should be about your character, not yourself.

 

Ø Please reference the war your character’s best friend fought in or emit this from your application if it is not part of the server lore.

 

Ø While this is not necessary, I would recommend that you try and develop/revise your character’s past a little more so that it doesn’t fall under the cliche of their parents being killed by orcs and their best friend dying.

 

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.
 

 

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

 

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

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Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.
 

 

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

 

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

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Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.

 

Ø You have put ‘Slaugh Waruk’ as your character’s name, however, you call them ‘Arathorn’ in your character’s biography. Please fix this.

 

Ø Your character’s father cannot be a personal guard for the king as that is a rank which must be earned through roleplay.

 

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

 

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

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You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

 

Please also make the changes below in your next application.

 

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be at least five-word sentences.

 

Ø You have put ‘Slaugh Waruk’ as your character’s name, however, you call them ‘Arathorn’ in your character’s biography. Please fix this.

 

Ø Your character’s father cannot be a personal guard for the king as that is a rank which must be earned through roleplay.

 

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

 

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /creq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.


 

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