Dwardoe

Changed Status to Under Review

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

For the following reasons,

• Your definitions on metagaming and powergaming are not quite right, I suggest you fix them and add examples to show your understanding of the concept
  • Metagaming & Powergaming
• Your biography is good however you are still missing some more complete sentences and mentioning lore that belongs to the server, I suggest including at least 2 additional lore references and 10 complete sentences (I’ll include a list of wiki pages you can use)
  • Dwarf Wiki
  • Dwarf Kingdom
  • Dwarf Nation Guide
  • Dwarf Religion
  • Dwarf Clans
  • Dwarf Guilds
  • Creatures
  • Flora
  • Arcas
• You should brush up on how the Kingdom and the religion are called it's Urguan and the Brathmordakin
• Your traits/quirks should be complete sentences and follow the following format.
  • At least one positive trait: (Strenght, skill, achievement)
  • At least one neutral trait: (Hobby, lesser skill, interesting fact)
  • At least one negative trait: (Weakness, Fear, Flaw)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

Your time limit expired.

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application. 

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.