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fancypotato

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: andreww#8566
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using OOC knowledge to influence IC knowledge and/or actions.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Pushing actions upon other players; unrealistic and unjust roleplay.
    Status: Denied

Upon the arrival at the marketplace, it preferred him to remove his gaze upon thievery and his previous perfidious lifestyle. Taking first steps upon land from his journey, he relieves his stiff body with a stretch. Still weary of being a newcomer, he materializes a ambiguous response, “Many thanks for the greeting however my pouch is poor, and I search for those requiring services, jobs, or apprenticeships. For a gentleman like you with an elegant attire, is there anything I could attend to for gathering or for chatter?”

 

His interest peeks to search for a nearby meeting place; perhaps, to thieve.

Character Name: Ethain Rivellon
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: Behind the cloaked appearance is a young face with dark eyes and hair. His build comes to a relatively average slender male hitting 5'9 and 160 lbs.
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LordScisso

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your personality traits lacks good traits. Please add at least two good traits.
  • In your bio, your character seems to already have enough notoriety to draw the attention of someone to assassinate him. Please edit this, as your character starts with no notoriety.
  • Your character can also not start as a master of the blade, this should be done in RP.
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If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LordScisso#5640 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

 

  • In your bio, your character seems to already have enough notoriety to draw the attention of someone to kill him for his actions. Please edit this, as your character starts with no notoriety.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @LordScisso#5640 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to time, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • You’re 24 hour time period has expired. Please re-apply when and if you so choose using the fixes above. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

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