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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: GreenTV12#2606
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is when a character get information that they did not get in rp
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: power gaming is when a character gets power that makes it unfair for others
    Status: Denied

he says quietly " ummm, I'm looking for someone." he says as he slips past the man, touching his shoulder. the feeling of terror fill the man.


Character Name: Stafen Cliff
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Brown hair, green eyes, 5"10, brown dirty cloths, mask
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography states that orcs killed your parents. This is a common character trope, so please be sure to change this!

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly! (Your skin has bronze armor, not brown clothing)

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. I also recommend changing your character's fear since it ties into a common character trope (parents killed by orcs.)

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. I also recommend changing your character's aspiration since it ties into a common character trope (parents killed by orcs.)

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 


 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message sarahbarah. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at sarahbarah#0007

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above 


 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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