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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Caden B#6322
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Abiding by the rules and paying attention to the topic at hand
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it can ruin the story/history or give you an upperhand
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"My name is Thalleous, son of Sapiens and heir to Viam Ligni...well I was, that was before the great fall."

Hesitating slightly I take a seat, and with a deep breath, I begin telling my story. "The Dragon of the Night descended upon my home, the forest city of Viam Ligni, accompanied by his rider, Corax. Also known as "The Night Rider" came upon the city during the darkest hour and set the city aflame, The fire shown too bright to look at! With the city in chaos, Corax put down his Dragon Vermax just outside the Fortress Gates. The Guards, in fear for their life, and lack of sight due to the fire could do nothing but let him pass. Corax marched into the throne room and met my Father Sapiens, Though my father fought hard, once he felt the tide of batter shift, he called for me to rum. Corax managed to get the better of him given his old age. Corax had no interest in me, he now held the silver band that once sat upon my father's head, This band has been the key to uniting the south for generations. I feel the guilt to this day, if I hadn't fled the castle that night I may have been able to save my father, I may have been able to save...Viam Ligni."
 
I've traveled many days and many nights, and I have no purpose, no plan. I often wonder if I should push my claim, or live the simple life of a commoner. 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

I hear a sound, "is that..?" I mutter. looking left, then right, and back again. I begin to panic as I hear the noise coming closer and closer. I draw my sword and lift a lantern off the ground to help me see, my breath heavies as I think back to the day I lost my father and everything I've known. and then silence, everything goes back. I awake in an old tavern just outside the city, The tender tells me an old fellow brought me in a sat me down. "she didn't have much to say" he said. "Just to keep an eye on you."


Character Name: Thalleous
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 6 foot, slim but built, around 140 pounds, brown eyes and hair, Green robe with patterns of gold, and a gold undershirt
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Hello there! It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to remove the example text!
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You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Hello there! It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to remove the example text!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are (royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy), please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.
  • Please look at our server lore! Here are some links that can help you out!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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