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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: abee#9986
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is taking in information that I know but my character wouldn't know and using it in RP.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is making all decisions in a situation and not letting the other person have a say in the situation.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

I stutter upon my sentences, "Hi, hello, wandering around looking for new adventures." I start playing with my jewelry, "There's also something about the city that attracts me, not sure what it is, but it's calling to me. " As I say that, I grab my bags and wink at him and disappear into the crowd.


Character Name: Erulassë
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: She stands at 5'1", with long brown wavy hair. Lilac colored eye and she weights about 130. Shwears a forest green and ivory dress with earrings.
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Changed Status to Under Review

Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:


 

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Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!

 

You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly. 

 

Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:

  • Your Biography is a little too short, and does not include the two required lore references. You've mentioned Elvenesse, which is great, but I just need you to include one more piece of LoTC lore - this can be to do with places, events or cultures. This information can be found on our wiki!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response just needs a few small tweaks. On LOTC, we roleplay in third person - using emotes and speech in that point of view. Be careful with divulging inner thought within your emote, as it is typical to only describe words and actions - what the other players may see your character doing and/or saying, rather than their inner thoughts. Here's an example scenario response I've written to the prompt supplied in the application:
    • Mary stepped off the boat, eagerly eyeing the world around her. She walked through the bustling markets, carefully manoeuvring in order to avoid the gaze of those merchants about. When the gentleman would approach her, she offered a timid smile in return. "I suppose - well, I suppose I'm not sure. Adventure calls me, and something inside of me prompted me to board that boat, and wind up here." She spoke earnestly.

Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to. 

 

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If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Hello again! Unfortunately your application has been:

 


 

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This is due to the 24 Hour time bracket expiring for changes to be made.

 

You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC!

 

Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.

 

We hope to see you roleplaying soon :)

 


 

 

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