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Levino
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: nicehype#3659
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: that's when you're not yourself but the character you're playing
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: If you try to make your character as strong as possible
    Status: Denied

First of all, I look around to see if he meant me, and when I realized it i sad "Hello who are you?" " Who he imagined then I answer him "actually I'm looking for a few arrows and I heard here there are very good ones."" Then I asked "What's going on?" minutes of the conversation I said "It's really nice to get to know you, you always see each other twice in life my friend!" and said goodbye nicely


Character Name: Levino Dromero
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 52
Physical Description: Sporty, Slim, normal muscle building and tiny
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

> Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions aren’t quiiite right and accurate! Please correct these, but remember to write in your own words and not plagiarise! ❤️
Here is a link to the definitions: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

> Your Bio is much too short – this needs to be at least 10 sentences long, and include two lore references! Please expand upon it, and add these two lore references.
This can be city names, important events, etc! ❤️
Here is a link to the Wiki, where you can find this information! : WIKI
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elves
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

 

> Your Personality Traits and Quirks should include at least one significant negative trait – please do ensure that you fix this! ❤️
 

> For your RP Scenario, I’d advise you to write in third person, in a similar format to the example!
Another example here – rather than, for your actions, putting something like ‘I look around to see if he meant me, and when I realized it i sad "Hello who are you?"’,
you might wish to put something more like this :
‘Levino peered left, then right, before his gaze finally settled on the man before him – a realisation that he was being addressed.
The elf would, with slight hesitance, inquire “Hello – who might you be?”’

 

> As you’ve put your Race as only ‘Elf’, this is not an edit, just a small note in case of confusion – if you intended for your character to be a *mixed* elf, the general appearance is fine!
Yet, if they were intended to be a *wood* elf, the skin tone is a tad too light – wood elves have a darker skin tone than for example high elves or snow elves, yet not the dark grey of dark elves.
 

> However, your Skin itself isn’t quiiiite up to LotC standard, I’m afraid;; I'd advise fixing this up, adding some shading and use of the second layer!
Alternatively, here is a link to the
LotC Skin Archives, where you can find skins that are free to reference from, use, or edit to fit your character! ❤️
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

❤️

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below ❤️
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> Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions aren’t quiiite right and accurate! Please correct these, but remember to write in your own words and not plagiarise! ❤️
Here is a link to the definitions: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

> Your Bio is much too short – this needs to be at least 10 sentences long, and include two lore references! Please expand upon it, and add these two lore references.
This can be city names, important events, etc! ❤️
Here is a link to the Wiki, where you can find this information! : WIKI
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elves
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

 

> Your Personality Traits and Quirks should include at least one significant negative trait – please do ensure that you fix this! ❤️
 

> For your RP Scenario, I’d advise you to write in third person, in a similar format to the example!
Another example here – rather than, for your actions, putting something like ‘I look around to see if he meant me, and when I realized it i sad "Hello who are you?"’,
you might wish to put something more like this :
‘Levino peered left, then right, before his gaze finally settled on the man before him – a realisation that he was being addressed.
The elf would, with slight hesitance, inquire “Hello – who might you be?”’

 

> As you’ve put your Race as only ‘Elf’, this is not an edit, just a small note in case of confusion – if you intended for your character to be a *mixed* elf, the general appearance is fine!
Yet, if they were intended to be a *wood* elf, the skin tone is a tad too light – wood elves have a darker skin tone than for example high elves or snow elves, yet not the dark grey of dark elves.
 

> However, your Skin itself isn’t quiiiite up to LotC standard, I’m afraid;; I'd advise fixing this up, adding some shading and use of the second layer!
Alternatively, here is a link to the
LotC Skin Archives, where you can find skins that are free to reference from, use, or edit to fit your character! ❤️
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

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Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

❤️

 

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