Kulmexar

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

For the following reasons,

• Your definitions on Metagaming & Powergaming are alright, however, I suggest using examples to show understanding of the concepts. The following link can help you out.
  • Metagaming & Powergaming
• Your Biography a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with at least a couple more complete sentences (7) and including at least two more lore mentions. The following links can help you with the latter. This is a space for you to write the origin/history of your character.
  • Dark Elf Wiki
  • Vira’ker
  • Vira’ker Settlement
  • Creatures
  • Flora
  • Arcas
• I suggest expanding your description a bit, how do his features look like? How is he usually dressed?
• Your skin doesn’t fit your race so well I invite you to look through our skin archive for a more fitting one.
• Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format
  • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
  • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
  • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

Your definitions are still lacking precision and your interesting facts should be complete sentences.

Barclay is a family name, if you are planning on using it you need to have written permission from a member of their family

You can’t have magical skills 
Your description is still lacking and you are still missing lore references. 

• Your definitions on Metagaming & Powergaming are alright, however, I suggest using examples to show understanding of the concepts. The following link can help you out.
  • Metagaming & Powergaming
• Your Biography a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with at least a couple more complete sentences (7) and including at least two more lore mentions. The following links can help you with the latter. This is a space for you to write the origin/history of your character.
  • Dark Elf Wiki
  • Vira’ker
  • Vira’ker Settlement
  • Creatures
  • Flora
  • Arcas
• I suggest expanding your description a bit, how do his features look like? How is he usually dressed?
• Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format
  • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
  • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
  • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

You’ve reached your time limit.

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.