LillAdre

• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki pages on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.

• Your character’s Background is too short and undetailled. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.

• The character Description field should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character, such as their build/stature, eye colour, hair colour and any other distinguishing features.

• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s interesting facts/traits. A flaw is generally something to do with a character’s personality/behaviour.

• Your character’s Interesting Facts & Traits must be written as full sentences that consist of at least five words.

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application.

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are too vague and don’t match the server’s definitions of these terms. Please refer to our wiki pages on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Please try and improve the Spelling & Grammar across your application.

• Your character’s Background is not detailed enough. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.

• Your character’s father cannot have been the best spearman in the kingdom. Perhaps he was just an exceptional spearman. Please change this.

• Please try and expand on your character’s Description. It should be written as a full sentence and more in depth. You could include information such as their build/stature and any other distinguishing features.

• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s interesting facts/traits. A flaw is generally something to do with a character’s personality/behaviour. 

  • Being sensitive to your father’s name isn’t really a full character flaw. You can use this, but you should try and expand on how this is a real point of struggle or difficulty for him.

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are too vague and don’t match the server’s definitions of these terms. Please refer to our wiki pages on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Please try and improve the Spelling & Grammar across your application.

• Your character’s Background is not detailed enough. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.

• Your character’s father cannot have been the best spearman in the kingdom. Perhaps he was just an exceptional spearman. Please change this.

• Please try and expand on your character’s Description. It should be written as a full sentence and more in depth. You could include information such as their build/stature and any other distinguishing features.

• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s interesting facts/traits. A flaw is generally something to do with a character’s personality/behaviour. 

  • Being sensitive to your father’s name isn’t really a full character flaw. You can use this, but you should try and expand on how this is a real point of struggle or difficulty for him.

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You may reapply at any time.