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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

Ø  Though detailed, your biography uses a lot of lore and events that are not part of lotc, please remove these and add pieces of lotc lore. You also cannot possess any magic starting out.

Ø  Your character name is not very roleplay friendly, please change this

Ø  You character description should detail your characters physical appearance, not past

Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are correct in essence, however they are very vague and lacking in detail. Please add more to these, and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarise)

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!

thanks, i am all most done i will message you when i am done editing thanks for the feed back i will take steps to make the changes you said.

Hello, just wondering if you've finished the edits?

Ø  You are still incorporating many events that have not happened in lotc in your biography. I'd suggest researching our wiki for a war or conflict that has happened in lotc, and basing your biography around that. You also cannot title yourself as king or major leader, as these sorts of things are earned through roleplay, not just making an application

Ø  I cannot see your skin, please attach the png file or a clearer screenshot

The dark forests, devil clans and killer clans are not part of our lore. I’ll ask you to please remake your biography and facts, to only include events and information that exists within the realm and lore of lotc (You can find this lore on our wiki)

You also cannot claim to descend from any form of royalty.

Please change your interesting facts, you cannot claim to descend from royalty, you've included things that are not in our lotc lore, and you must have one weakness within your three facts.

Also be careful, you've made your character seem very OP, which is considered unrealistic and powergaming

Your application has been

The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately.

Please make the above changes before you do so