Jump to content

OtryygViking


OtryggViking
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using outside resources to gain an advantage in game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Being to overpowered.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes. I draw my sword. "I'm not interested in you, now move or I will move you." I point the sword at him.  "Now what is your decision?"


Character Name: OtryggBerserker
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Long black hair, armored, gray eyes, slightly buff, 6'4, 280 lbs, white.
Screenshot of Skin:



User Feedback

Recommended Comments

Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:


 

gC3qFtN4pwt64M-RrJHA4IUkj4APxkPGJPTtLJqR0SC-qERCs9X9xUUq4C6HpbSMdJdBmF5b8Szh0mz81ZtmxxFVKMoyQuDordFYqByNNDN_IxN-nSTurnl9HFcxyRnLrlSDp0Na

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!

 

You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly. 

 

Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions are a little vague. Please revise this on our wiki, and expand on your definitions.
  • Your Biography is too short, and does not include lore from our server. These lore pieces, such as places, events or cultures can be found on our wiki. Also be sure to tell the story of your character's past fully, with at least 10 sentences.
  • Your Character Name is memey in nature and cannot be used.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response just needs a few small tweaks. On LOTC, we roleplay in third person - using emotes and speech in that point of view. Be careful with divulging inner thought within your emote, as it is typical to only describe words and actions - what the other players may see your character doing and/or saying, rather than their inner thoughts. Here's an example scenario response I've written to the prompt supplied in the application:
    • Mary stepped off the boat, eagerly eyeing the world around her. She walked through the bustling markets, carefully manoeuvring in order to avoid the gaze of those merchants about. When the gentleman would approach her, she offered a timid smile in return. "I suppose - well, I suppose I'm not sure. Adventure calls me, and something inside of me prompted me to board that boat, and wind up here." She spoke earnestly.

Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to. 

 

 ljOQPN1_lqWZaJUeB6Vi2n7Dc1u3axuHHP8yod2zyE5IJTLlN6YwYZHR9e1glnIyjduE4XpfgTeNR77QA78ri1BCFiUxnAIspd-d9mXVUsEejTQNXXauFcMhq_Ls9S8KQjxjRHFS

If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Hello again! Unfortunately your application has been:

 


 

4FxfZkNZ4FiyosrlYa1QdMlFyun9zyd5VeeFFDDcXIghsmcW0tEYMB5_m48Qz2sJK2QgEuU4Sci5MSJhqHEEwp_XpIfHLnjMI0mf6BgMuMFNsz6-O1U3e4VTt86iNei86jMCWFgT

This is due to the 24 Hour time bracket expiring for changes to be made.

 

You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC!

 

Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.

 

We hope to see you roleplaying soon :)

 


 

 

Link to comment
Share on other sites


  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...