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PanNorris507
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming its using the players knowledge to make or try to make actions the character can't consider because it uses knowledge only the players can have
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: a type of roleplay the forces someone to do an action for example /i kick the admin in the leg breaking it\ in that example im forcing the character of the admin to act as his leg was broken, powergaming can also be refered as ignoring an action for example using the same example as before /i kick the admin in the leg breaking it\ but this time the admin ignores my action like it never happened, powergaming also includes doing impossible actions like breaking a stone pillar or surviving a 100 meter fall
    Status: Denied

If it's not a problem, I'll use asterisks for the actions.

 

* I see the man coming towards me with a big smile and I greet him with an even bigger smile *

 

hi i came to this city for some provisions and a place to sleep, the last dungeon i entered was quite dangerous and i almost died but i managed to get out and got a pretty good reward in gold coins so i am going to search for a place to stay

 

* after saying goodbye to the person I walked along the trails of the bassar trying not to be tempted by the merchandise that the merchants were selling and looking for a store where I could buy supplies or an inn where I could stay *


Character Name: Alumian
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 70
Physical Description: marked muscles and arms slightly longer than normal, if I put it less on a scale of strength of the dwarves 1 being a baby and 10 being the best fight
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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to multiple reasons though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  • Your Character Fear needs to be connected to your Character Biography.
  • Your Character Like is a bit lackluster. Try adding some more information, and connect it to your Character Biography!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written in third person.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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