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Pokemon991
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: doing somthing out of the game and getting guideance it can be found on Skype, Discord, Teamspeak or the forums
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: its like breaking of immersion, and a loss for fairness to other players. It makesit so that it not allow another player to respond/defend himself from
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Poke
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: very happy all the time
will kill if need too
has black hair
skin is white
loves to make sword
is 6FT 2IN
Screenshot of Skin:



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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

 


 

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Ø  Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are incorrect and too vague. Please add more info to these, and click the links I’ve provided for the best sources of info!

 

Ø  Your biography is too short. You should aim for 3-5 sentences at minimum, however to establish a character fit for roleplay we suggest at least a paragraph.

 

Ø  Your biography is lacking the one required lore reference, as you cannot use ‘Jackaland’ since it’s not a place in LOTC lore. This could be a city name in which your character was born/lives in, a religion in which they follow, or a world event they witnessed and/or remember. You can find these pieces of lore on the Wiki.

 

Ø  Your character description must detail the physical appearance of your persona. (Skin tone, hair colour, eye colour, height etc.)

 

Ø Your skin does not quite fit the medieval theme of the server. Please edit or change this, and also feel free to use a skin from our Skin Archive

 

Ø  Your interesting facts need to include at least one clear negative trait. This could be a physical and/or mental weakness, a fear, anything really!

 

 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord (Ivory#8860)

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The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to reach out!

 

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Ø  Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are still incorrect and too vague. Please add more info to these, and click the links I’ve provided for the best sources of info!

 

Ø  Your biography is too short, and needs to be in full sentences. You should aim for 3-5 sentences at minimum, however to establish a character fit for roleplay we suggest at least a paragraph.

 

Ø  Your interesting facts need to include at least one clear negative trait. Right now they are unrealistic (using a sword as a baby) and make no sense. Please edit these

  

 

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I am done

 

I am 

14 hours ago, Ivoryyy_ said:

Ø  Your Metagaming & Powergaming definitions are still incorrect and too vague. Please add more info to these, and click the links I’ve provided for the best sources of info!

 

Ø  Your biography is too short, and needs to be in full sentences. You should aim for 3-5 sentences at minimum, however to establish a character fit for roleplay we suggest at least a paragraph.

 

Ø  Your interesting facts need to include at least one clear negative trait. Right now they are unrealistic (using a sword as a baby) and make no sense. Please edit these

  

 

I am done with everything

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You have lots of unrealised tropes in your character, such as being able to lift large amounts of weight easily, and overall a lot of over-powered traits. Please change this

 

Your definitions are still too vague

 

Disliking wheat is not a character flaw, please change this

 

 

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35 minutes ago, Ivoryyy_ said:

You have lots of unrealised tropes in your character, such as being able to lift large amounts of weight easily, and overall a lot of over-powered traits. Please change this

 

Your definitions are still too vague

 

Disliking wheat is not a character flaw, please change this

 

 

wat do you mean

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Your application has been DENIED because of these reason(s):

  • Your biography should be complete sentences and read like a biography would. Your bio reads like a list of character traits. When you reapply, make your biography more like a backstory of your character, rather than a list.

 

 

You may reapply whenever convenient.


 

Don’t worry friend, here is a link to the LotC New Player Help Discord! https://discord.gg/JzbhzCH



Feel free to contact me if you need further assistance you can pm me on the forums or message me on discord at: Austin#4276

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