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✿ Your Metagaming definition is not up to LOTC standards; please read over our wiki --->Here with our definitions. 

✿Your Character Biography must be at least TEN sentences long, it also must include at least ONE lore references Use our WIKI for some help! 

✿Your Character Name May not be Gerald” the lame. “ You can be Gerald, but there is no reason for you have the lame in your name unless you have given a reason in your character Biography.

✿Your Personality Traits/Quirks are not quite there, you can describe your characters personality, likes, dislikes, faith, opinions and philosophies. This must include at least one significant negative personality trait. These must be complete sentences and not a list of traits.

✿ Your Roleplay scenario Just to have you more adjusted, just needs a little tweak.

 looks at the noble with annoyed glance” im  fallowing my buddy (he hasten made his name yet) trying to make a living. “walks away”

Changed to: *Looks at the noble with an annoyed glance* “Im following my buddy, trying to make a living.” 

✿ Make sure you are also using proper grammar and spelling when doing your revisions!

You only have 24 Hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes, you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord. Discord:Tigergiri#0744  Im always happy to help!

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join ourr New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

21 hours! Please make sure you do your edits @Gerald_the_lame

On 9/19/2019 at 6:33 PM, Tigergiri said:

 

 

✿ Your Metagaming definition is not up to LOTC standards; please read over our wiki --->Here with our definitions. 

 

 

✿Your Character Biography must be at least TEN sentences long, it also must include at least ONE lore references Use our WIKI for some help! 

✿Your Character Name May not be Gerald” the lame. “ You can be Gerald, but there is no reason for you have the lame in your name unless you have given a reason in your character Biography.

✿Your Personality Traits/Quirks are not quite there, you can describe your characters personality, likes, dislikes, faith, opinions and philosophies. This must include at least one significant negative personality trait. These must be complete sentences and not a list of traits.

✿ Your Roleplay scenario Just to have you more adjusted, just needs a little tweak.

 looks at the noble with annoyed glance” im  fallowing my buddy (he hasten made his name yet) trying to make a living. “walks away”

Changed to: *Looks at the noble with an annoyed glance* “Im following my buddy, trying to make a living.” 

 

✿ Make sure you are also using proper grammar and spelling when doing your revisions!

 

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