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Lucette
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: goes past the limits of the game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: excluding the storytelling to reach a goal
    Status: Denied

“i came to this city seeking adventure sir” replied lucette in calm and kind tone “ what brought you here?” she asked the gentleman who’s name she hadn't learned yet “reply” “Thats very intriguing my name Lucette Hawthorne and its pleasure to make your acquaintance” she said extending her hand for him to shake “reply" “ a well i really must be on my way but if i need anything ill be sure to find you” She said while disappearing into the large crowd of people.


Character Name: Lucette
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A white haired girl with brown eyes in a red shirt with a plain grey skirt and a pair of brown boots. She is 5'6 and weighs about 120 pounds.
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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • In your meta-gaming definition, you should revise and re-read the wiki definition. It’s not clear that you fully understand it, also – you should add an example.
  • In your power-gaming definition, you should revise and re-read the wiki definition. It’s not clear that you fully understand it, also – you should add an example.
  • In your character-bio, your character would likely not be able to be born in Axios, seeing as it was abandoned hundreds of years ago and your character is 18. Also, you need at least two valid lore references – these can be almost everything, like the mentioning of a city for example.
  • In your role-play scenario, you need at least 4 sentences. What you currently have appears to be one long run on sentence.
  • Your skin, is also too modern and not quite fitting in with the medieval theme of LOTC.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @ NOZway#5616 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the New Player Discord as well. 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to 24 hours, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • In your meta-gaming definition, you should revise and re-read the wiki definition. It’s not clear that you fully understand it, also – you should add an example.
  • In your power-gaming definition, you should revise and re-read the wiki definition. It’s not clear that you fully understand it, also – you should add an example.
  • In your character-bio, your character would likely not be able to be born in Axios, seeing as it was abandoned hundreds of years ago and your character is 18. Also, you need at least two valid lore references – these can be almost everything, like the mentioning of a city for example.
  • In your role-play scenario, you need at least 4 sentences. What you currently have appears to be one long run on sentence.
  • Your skin, is also too modern and not quite fitting in with the medieval theme of LOTC.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @ NOZway#5616, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa 

 

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