SilverDragonWolf

• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.

• You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.

• Your character’s Background is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.

• To my knowledge, there have been no Elven Boarding Schools on the server, so this part of your backstory won’t align with the server’s history properly. Because of this, you’ll need to remove this part so that your character makes sense in the world.

• Your character Description should be written in full sentences. This field can be viewed by other players in game.

• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s personality traits/quirks. This should be a trait which is significantly negative about them. Disliking people who stab you in the back isn’t a character flaw and is probably a healthy dislike to have.

• Make sure to describe what your character is doing/an action in your Roleplay Scenario and format your response by wrapping any speech in speech marks. 

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions need to include the terms’ definitions as well as an example of what they could look like. Your metagaming example is good but neither of the terms have a definition at the moment. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Your Powergaming definition does not match the server’s definition of powergaming. Please refer to our wiki page on powergaming to find LotC’s accepted definition (just remember not to plagiarise!).
• Your character’s Name needs to be a realistic medieval/fantasy sounding name, not your username. Try searching up Elven sounding names online to help you with this.
• Asulon didn’t exist during your character’s lifetime. It was a land that was inhabited a long time ago in game and has now been vacated for decades in terms of in game years. Because of this, your character could not have lived there.
• Lin’Evaral also didn’t exist during your character’s lifetime to my knowledge. Try searching for places on the wiki from the last map/continent of the server ‘Atlas’ for  places your character may have visited as a child and places from the currently inhabited map ‘Arcas’ for places they may have visited in the last few decades.
• Make sure to describe what your character is doing/an action in the Roleplay Scenario and format your response by wrapping speech in speech marks (“ “).

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Your character cannot have lived in a treehouse in Agnarum because this nation’s city was underground. Also, Agnarum wasn’t established when your character was born. If you’re having trouble working out the server’s timeline and which cities they would have been able to come from, feel free to message me about it.
• Your response to the Roleplay Scenario should be written in third person (e.g. ‘he walked to the market’ rather than ‘I walked to the market’).  Also make sure that you are using full sentences that make sense grammatically. You also can’t write what other characters are doing, only your own. This means that you shouldn’t be writing what the man is saying to you, only your own character’s response to it.

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

• Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes. It doesn’t need to be perfect but it’s best if your application is as easy to read and understand as possible.
• Your Powergaming definition is incorrect and your Metagaming definition has to include the definition of metagaming as well as just an example. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Your response to the Roleplay Scenario shouldn’t include information such as your character’s thoughts or feeling, because this isn’t something people can see from an outside perspective. Instead of saying ‘and feeling comfortable I said’ you should change this to something along the lines of ‘he said in a more comfortable tone’. This indicates that your character is feeling comfortable but shows it in a way that other players’ characters would be able to see.

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You may reapply at any time.