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SirAmielFirst


SirAmielFirst
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information acquired OOC, or Out Of Character, and using it to your advantage IC, or In Character. Example: Someone says that he/she owns a shop OOC, and you hear about it, so IC you go and loot the place.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Carrying out acts that would make you powerful, like instantly killing an enemy via emotes. Example: Your a mage that has a spell, and you use it to transform yourself into a dragon and instantly kill your opponent your getting revenge on.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Ser Amiel
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Blue-Green eyes, full beard, blonde hair, robust, no visible scars, about 5'11
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Changed Status to Under Review

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

 

  • Your Biography is a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with complete sentences and including at least two more lore mentions. You can’t join the server being a Knight, this is a rank you’ll need to earn through Roleplaying with the player base you desire. The following links can help you with the latter.
  • Your description should focus on your character’s physical characteristics, make sure you describe him so that we might picture him in our heads.
  • Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format (Your last one is a bit obvious)
    • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
    • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
    • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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Hey! So I also suggest you read up on the following link and take into account its year 1721 in game so you are not using lore from a time before you being born, I also suggest reading the lore I shared with you on my previous comment so you have the latest lore.

7 hours ago, SoulReapingWolf said:

Your Biography is a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with complete sentences and including at least two more lore mentions. You can’t join the server being a Knight, this is a rank you’ll need to earn through Roleplaying with the player base you desire. The following links can help you with the latter.

 

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I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

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But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

You’ve reached the time limit.

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

You should change your weakness given it’s a bit of a general one. (Everyone is weak to poison and dieseases)

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

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