Skepticles

I was tempted to deny this, due to the fact you seem to have skipped a lot of the guidelines above. But, I will note them out individually.

• “ Generally, try to keep your application free of grammar mistakes and spelling errors. We aren’t looking for perfection, but a well-written application makes the reviewing process much smoother. “
  • Not only this, but it makes a difference to reading in game- since the server is based on reading and writing. Keep an eye on grammar- capitals and periods in the right places.
• Your powergaming definition needs work. I suggest looking up power-emoting, too.
• “You cannot create an otherworldly or magical character.”
  • You can not be a mage on beginning within the server. Your character needs to learn it as he goes, and he can not have a magical gauntlet.
• “You cannot create a physically supernatural character.”
  • While he can be a skilled warrior, keep in mind that he is certainly not the best. You also have to consider character size. If you did wish for him to duel weild axes, he would have to be builky and full of muscle. He can also not be a mage at the same time. When you learn magic, it drains you physically. Keep that in mind.
• You also need to include two references of lore that make sense to the timeline.
  • We have only been on this land, not even 20 years? Make sure you research this as the city you mention might not have existed when your character was 70.
• Inventions, and the progression of such are moderated by staff on the server. The timeline is kept quite tight knit, and so he can not be an inventor.
• Second names are not mandatory, but they are preferred.
• With the information above, please alter the character description to suit.
• “ Your Interesting Facts should include something positive, something neutral, and something negative. The most important part of this section is the negative characteristic, whether a mental trait or physical ailment, having a character with imperfections makes for better roleplay. “
  • Your interesting facts shouldbe trait based. They should also make sense; having freckles as a snow elf, does not make sense.
• Finally, goggles and your gauntlet make no sense on the skin, so they should be removed.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Denying based on inactivity. Feel free to make the changes above, and reapply.