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SkyCloudia
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming: Roleplaying to an extent where you do something that you can't do according to your character's information.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming: Roleplaying in a way that the character you own is not able to do according to your character information.
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Skyveron
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 319
Physical Description: She has light blue hair which is very snowy, and the clothes to match with it. Her eyes are blue, and her figure is very cute. She is 173cm tall.
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Hello! As you can see, your app is almost ready, though there are some changes you need to make, But don’t worry; all you have to do is make the following changes:

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition needs to be a definition, please! You have a good example, but I’m not seeing a definition. Please refer to the Wiki for reference. 
  • Your Powergaming Definition isn’t quite up to LotC standard. Please refer to the Wiki for reference. 
  • Snow elves tend to go insane around the age of 600-700 and don’t live much longer after that, so your Character Age doesn’t make much sense. Please refer to the Wiki to see how long your character’s race usually lives for. 
  • Your Character Biography includes a bit about a crystal that cursed your character. I don’t see this in the lore, but either way, your character cannot start out cursed by a magic crystal. Please fix this. 
  • Your Character Biography needs to include at least one lore reference. Please refer to the Wiki for lore on your character race and Arcas. 
  • Your Character Description needs to be a physical description of your character. This can include hair colour, eye colour, height, etc.
  • Your Interesting Facts needs to be unique from the rest of your application. 

Make sure you do them within 24 hours, or the app will be denied unless I am contacted!

 

Whenever you are done or if you have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums or add me on discord at LotsOfMuffins#0119. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

 

While you wait, you can join the new player discord here: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

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Hello! As you can see, your app is almost ready, though there are some changes you need to make, But don’t worry; all you have to do is make the following changes:

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are still not exactly LotC standard. Please take a look at the Wiki again for help. 
  • In your Character Biography, you mention that “Those dreams gave her the power to fight on in her emotions, the power to conquer her own fears. Fearless of the dark, she could withstand the harsh winter more than ever before.” I don’t see how dreams can give you the power to “fight on in her emotions, the power to conquer her own fears” as well as how she “could withstand the harsh winter more than ever before.”
  • In your Character Biography, you include a bit about her entering the dream realm for 19 years. I’m confused as to how she entered the dream realm as well as how she managed to live for 19 years without eating or drinking. 
  • Your Character Biography needs to include at least one lore reference. Please refer to the Wiki for lore on your character race and Arcas. 
  • You say she is immune to pain in her Interesting Facts. How?

Make sure you do them within 24 hours, or the app will be denied unless I am contacted!

 

Whenever you are done or if you have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums or add me on discord at LotsOfMuffins#0119. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

 

While you wait, you can join the new player discord here: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

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Hello! As you can see, your app is almost ready, though there are some changes you need to make, But don’t worry; all you have to do is make the following changes:

 

 

Make sure you do them within 24 hours, or the app will be denied unless I am contacted!

 

Whenever you are done or if you have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums or add me on discord at LotsOfMuffins#0119. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki:https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

 

While you wait, you can join the new player discord here: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

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Hey, congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to the community of LotC!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [LotsOfMuffins#0119]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message LotsOfMuffins to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way! Lastly here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/179894-new-player-guide/?pagecomment1690465=1

I’ll see you out there!

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