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Kirai
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: xItsTimeToCry#2570
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming: A character who knows more than they are supposed to. if someone told a person on discord that they were drowning, to come save them, if he/she listened and rushed over knowing someone was drowning, it ill not make sense.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming: A character that makes things unrealistic and unfair.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

The lady blinked. crossing her arms. looking at all the cute little shops and pubs. then looking back, “Hm. it is quite none of your business, sir. now if you would excuse me..” She walked away from the man. taking a look at all the beautiful shops and taverns. once again. As she kept walking forward, she felt a bit uncormfortable with the amount of people there. she stopped at a tiny little food stall. then grabbing a pear.
| My skin, i am willing to change as it is not my best. feel free to leave suggestions if its not very good.

https://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/15117680/green-dreams---rce/


Character Name: Icai
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: White, Green eyes, skinny, 5.7 Imagine picking up your neighbors 8 year old cat. thats how heavy she is
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions need to be definitions. Please define them instead of stating your opinions on them!
  • Your Character Biography states that your character moved to Gladewynn, which was destroyed several decades ago and no longer exists. Please correct this!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Your Skin is a bit too modern. Please refer to our Skin Archive for examples of more-acceptable skins, and feel free to use one!

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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1FVrr_EOTluCLUoQu4yQKvdm8h6PfTxTFKgkOk3N

 

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s too short. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand.
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • I am asking you to define roleplay. Please do so in How would you define roleplay, and have you ever roleplayed before?
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. I see only three sentences.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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1FVrr_EOTluCLUoQu4yQKvdm8h6PfTxTFKgkOk3N

 

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is too close to our wiki’s definition and could be considered plagiarized. Please do not copy it too closely from the wiki.
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • I am asking you to define roleplay. Please do so in How would you define roleplay, and have you ever roleplayed before?
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response includes thoughts and feelings. During roleplay, please only emote what other people would see. They would not see your character’s thoughts, so please correct this accordingly!
    • ”As she kept walking forward, she felt a bit uncormfortable with the amount of people there.”

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is too close to our wiki’s definition and could be considered plagiarized. Please do not copy it too closely from the wiki.
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • I am asking you to define roleplay. Please do so in How would you define roleplay, and have you ever roleplayed before?
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response includes thoughts and feelings. During roleplay, please only emote what other people would see. They would not see your character’s thoughts, so please correct this accordingly!
    • ”As she kept walking forward, she felt a bit uncormfortable with the amount of people there.”


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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