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TheLionheart92

By TheLionheart92

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using OOC knowledge in an ingame scenario where your character would have no way of having that knowledge
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing character actions on other player, being a "god" Otherwise disrupting RP standards and fashion
    Status: Accepted
Character Name: Leoven Telal
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 146
Physical Description: Brown eyes and hair, lighter skin than most of his kind. Wears light and comfortable armor and clothing
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Lirinya

Changed Status to Under Review

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  • You character biography should contain two pieces of server lore.
    • At such an age, your character would have seen so much of the world. You have so much lore at your disposal.
  • I also suggest spell checking. Whilst not worth denial over, just take a moment to re-read whta you write.
  • Surnames, whilst not mandatory, are suggested.
  • Please elaborate on your description.
    • What does he wear? His height and eye colour, and so on.
  • Your interesting facts should be based on character traits.
    • Having a stammer, for example, might be considered a quirk or trait.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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