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• Technically, with both Norlander and highlander stated, you’ve included two lore references. However, at 23 years old, your character has seen so much more. Please include at least another lore reference- this could be an event, or a place or something.
• Please elaborate on your metagaming definition.
• Your powergaming definition is not what we are looking for. I suggest looking up power emoting, too.
• Second names, while not mandatory, are usually existant.
• ‘Smaller than average human’ isn’t viable, in my eyes, as part of the definition. The human wiki page specifies heights and appearences, so please elaborate on this in general.
• Your interesting facts should be trait based.
  • Weak, for example, can be a trait.
• There should be a positive, neutral and a negative.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

The only thing I ask you alter, is the powergaming definition. 

You're getting there, but aren't still entirely grasping it. 

Again, try looking up power emoting. 

I’m going to touch upon a few minor things that I don’t see worth denying for, ot pending further, but I will add them on here.

•  Lore with dates included can be very confusing. While your character can be from Dunharrow, remember that the city was founded in 1712, and it is currently only 1717- which means that he wasn’t born there, but could have lived there for a few years.
• Your power gaming definition is still lacking, but it states the basics. Power gaming and power emoting go hand in hand on LOTC. Forcing actions upon others, without giving them a chance to respond, is what we here consider powergaming. Make sure that every emote you make towards another character is an attempt, and make sure to use the /roll system if needs be.
• I’ll allow you your trickery trait/skill as your positive, but remember that it isn’t foolproof, and that it would not be difficult for doctors, or medically trained characters to see through it- so remember to make your emotes descriptive.

Remember to join the new player discord if you wish for some guidence, and you can find the new player guide [here].

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