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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Character Biography

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

• Your Character Biography mentions Ogres. Ogres do not exist on our server.

• Your Character Biography uses a common character trope! Please change that.

Physical Description

• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Here is more about our races! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

  • Also! : https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199348-story-update-the-racial-update/

• Your Physical Description not in accordance with your race or lore! Humans can't have natural red eyes. If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Here is more about our races! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

Personality Traits/Quirks

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

• Your Character Biography mentions Ogres. Ogres do not exist on our server.

 Roleplay Scenario Response

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit off.  I suggest writing the emotes in full sentences. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

   

Don’t bum out! You can submit a new application and try again right after,  just make sure you correct the things listed!

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If you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message minty_roses) !

Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!

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