Valor777 22 Share Posted December 9, 2014 [size="5"]Character Name[/size] CRONA LUNAS Aliases: Ren Takumi Adio Lunas Nicknames: "The Lone Crow"Age: 17 YearsGender: MaleRace: HumanStatus: Still Kicking[size="3"]Description[/size]Height: 5'7"Weight: 110 Lbs. (50 Kg)Body Type: Lean and CompactEyes: Dark BlueHair: Dirty Blonde to BrownSkin: Slightly TannedMarkings/Tattoos: Hidden under his grey face mask are many scars around his mouth that he does not show people.Health: Physically fit. Mentally, not so much.Personality: Crona seems to have three different 'modes' or personalities, being Crona Lunas, Adio Lunas, or Ren Takumi. Crona is his dominant personality where he appears very sadistic and his mental insanity is very noticeable in a threatening way. Adio, is his hidden and recessive personality. When he is Adio, he is very polite and acts like a normal human. Adio also seems to be very charismatic and diplomatic. His final and sporadically appearing personality, Ren, is batshit crazy. Ren has no perception of consequence or danger. He tends to follow the orders of those around him or the will of his 'Master'. Master is the voice in Crona's head that was created when he developed schizophrenia at a young age. Master appears at random times no matter what 'mode' Crona is in. Crona tends to follow the will of Master above all else, even if it ends up as his downfall.Inventory: In his sleeve rests a small case carrying three throwing knives. "Digger", "Extra", and "Tertiary". They tend to be covered in puffer fish toxins that he is granted by a fisher friend of his. At his side is a parrying dagger that he uses if his knives don't suffice. He isn't the strong type to wield a spear or claymore effectively. He wields these mainly as slashing weapons with the occasional throw if need be.Further Details: He has a few quirks that allow you to tell it is him, even under a mask. Crona tends to click his teeth into each other when he is happy and succeeds. It stems from him laughing with a lot of jaw movement. When he is in his 'Ren' personality he tends to have large exaggerated movements. Stepping and dancing down roads and taking large sweeps with his knives. 'Master' always 'hides his face' from Crona. As in, Crona doesn't know what Master looks like, but at times he does take the form of people Crona associates with. To have Master take someone's shape, Crona must greatly respect them and recognize them as a superior. When something like this happens, Crona tends to start almost worshipping the person in question. He will follow an order without question, or even allow himself to be hurt by the person, for he thinks it is 'for his own good'. It has only ever happened to two people in his short life.[size="3"]Life Style[/size]Alignment*: Chaotic Neutral or True Neutral depending on his mood.Deity*: 'Master'Religion: CronaismAlliance/Nation/Home Kythira CastleJob/Class: Mercenary and AssassinTitle(s): Invictus Lieutenant Head of the Lunas FamilyProfession(s): Cutting Trees Cutting PeopleSpecial Skill(s): Able to fail at anything with ease.Flaw(s):Able to fail at anything with ease. He is way too easily convinced to do what he is asked. He seemingly doesn't have morals at times.[size="3"]Magic*[/size]N/A[size="3"]Weaponry[/size]Fighting Style: Lunas Family Martial ArtsTrained Weapon[s]: Bow Throwing Knives DaggersFavored Weapon: Throwing KnivesArchery: Often uses a shortbow for attacking from range. [size="3"]Biography[/size]Parents: DeceasedSiblings: Alitaus L. Lynn Los LunasChildren: N/AExtended Family: Edward Lunas Bublicus LunasPet(s): A crow that he has domesticated for messenger purposes. He also took a small sentient slime when he was hunting monsters which he keeps in his bag. A petrified Cockatrice Egg. [size="3"]History[/size] Terrible Toddler Times: When Crona was born he was hated by his parents. He never discovered why his parents had a child but, he knew they did not want one. He was kept in terrible conditions living in the closet of his parent's inn room. He was kept like a pet. He only saw his parents when he was fed their leftover meal of a bit of bread and whatever ale was left. He never was let outside of the inn room. Crona spent his time listening to conversations and fights from the downstairs tavern. He learned all he could about what was outside his walls. He was extremely skinny from lack of food. As for drink, he had little more than strong ale. His parents would become annoyed whenever Crona asked them anything. Crona did not even know his parents name or his last name. Cruel Child Continuance: At the age of seven, Crona's parents couldn't feed an extra mouth. They couldn't even keep the inn room. Since his parents were out of money he was thrown to the streets. His parents left him alone in front of the tavern just sitting there. No goodbye or direction. Crona heard his stomach grumble when he sat in the road. Crona realized he needed to get food from someone. He was lucky enough to knwo some Common so he could speak. Stumbling around Crona would ask people for food. He had no luck until he saw some dwarves sitting on a bench. "C-c-can I have food, p-please?" Crona said looking at the dwarves weakly. The dwarves began to laugh and whisper to one another. "We don't have any but, if ye go over there ye can ask some fellas in that building," a dwarf said pointing to the royal castle. Crona did the best of what he could to run over to the castle. After being pushed down twice and told to watch where he was going once he had made it. He walked carefully up to the gate as he saw a man walk out. "Can I have food?" Crona spoke. The man chuckled and pushed through Crona. "Find yer own food peasants, heheheh," The man replied. In Crona's memory peasant was an insult at the inn. Crona kicked the man in the leg out of rage. He was then chased into a crowd by the man's guards but, they had quickly lost sight of him. He continued begging for food as his years slipped away. Agonizing Adolescent Ages: Crona grew to the age of fourteen. He soon learned about books and writing. He wished to learn to read and write but he could not afford anything. It was not as easy begging for food now because he was no longer a child. He had searched the streets and trash bins for what he had eaten. One day Crona was promised food in return for a small amount of manual labor. Later he found out that the man was trying to sell him into slavery. Crona starts to lose all hope in humanity. After Crona was finding his daily meal of a carrot someone dropped he hears something coming from a nearby alleyway where he sometimes searches for food. He peaks around the corner of a building and sees two men. One begins to talk. "Please no sir, I need these mina to buy my food, I have a wife and children," He says. "I am tired of your resistance! I am done!" The other man says as he stabs the victim clear in the heart with a dagger. The man now notices Crona and motions for him to come closer. Crona hesitates and slowly moves towards the man. "Don't be scared I am Sektran who are you?" The man says as he smiles at Crona. "I-I am C-Crona," Crona replies hesitantly. "Crona don't tell anyone what you saw and I will help you okay?" Sektran says. They then continue to talk. Crona tells Sektran he wishes to learn to read and write and most importantly grow to be strong like Sektran. Sektran tells him to keep quite and gives him a bit of food a book to learn to read and a journal to write in. Crona learned to write soon after and saw Sektran around the city every once in a while. Crona had possessions now. A journal, a book, and hope. One day Crona saw Sektran being taken to a crowd by two armed Imperials. Then and there, Sektran was hanged by the empire for multiple counts of murder and robbery. Crona will never forget his last words. "CURSE YOU CRONA, YOUR THE ONE WHO SHOULD BE UP HERE!" After that Crona had finally learned how to write and he wrote one thing: I was given hope in this world of grey. But for my happiness the my one friend taken away. Petrifiying Present Pains: Crona now is in a world of sadness that he could not be brought out of. He looks for more ways to kill those who have good lives that they take for granted and the officials of the empire. He uses the much easier way of obtaining food, stealing. Other than gathering food all Crona does is sit around and cry. He is getting more and more consumed with killing and stealing and becoming powerful. He wishes to be the most powerful man so he can get whatever he wants like all the nobles he utterly despises. Crona is even beginning to kill for money and to please people that make his goal of more power easier. He hides his crimes as well as he can. Crona will continue going deeper and deeper into crime until his life is consumed by his thirst for power. Crona’s father was an alcoholic, argumentative, abusive criminal. He payed for his food and inn room as a highwayman. His father suffered from the mental illnesses: Bipolar I and Bipolar II. These were passed down to Crona and he developed them at a young age. Bipolar I causes a person to have times when they become extremely optimistic and would easily take risks. This will cause Crona to do dangerous things when he is having fun or is being praised during one of his Bipolar I episodes. Bipolar II causes a person to have times when they become extremely depressed, angry, or irritable. This will cause Crona to become extremely mad, depressed, or even flat out insane. During his Bipolar II manias he may do things like avoid his friends, go rob or kill someone to take out anger, even cut himself to see blood spill. Crona was a very untrusting person at first. He slowly begun to break his shyness for survival purposes and greed. He joined a slaving group, uneasy at first but, was soon accepted an given an apprenticeship to one of the leaders, The Brittle Man. Brittle begins to teach him the ways of being a successful criminal and gaining infamy throughout Anthos. Since Crona had joined the organization, many problems among the members have sprouted. Crona would look around and see the men of his group fight and draw each other’s blood. Much like the cannibalism, he soon found this to be typical and ignored it. He had decided to deal with these things for he finally had a home and people that would protect him. As the fights grew larger around him Crona began to once again feel uneasy. Some of the other members believed that it would be best to eliminate a controlling member. The lover of Brittle, Crona’s master. Crona went along with the plan until some of the people that were in on it ratted them out. He couldn’t believe that those he trusted once again betrayed him. He was enraged when he found out but, it was too late. He was captured by the others and endured much torture. The torture was what caused Crona to slip over the edge. Due to his depression and Bipolar I and II, he developed a severe case of Schizophrenia. Schizophrenia is a mental disorder that causes the victim to see, hear, feel, and smell things that are not actually there. Crona has one particular voice that he hears. This voice takes over different names depending on traumatic events in Crona’s life. At one point the voice in his head was called Alitaus, the man who claim to be his brother that tried to kill him. The generic name that he calls the voice is “Master.” After Crona has more experiences with the voice in his head, he will begin to have other senses triggered by his schizophrenia. His mental illness causes him to hear and eventually see things that can trick him into doing something by frightening him, angering him, or convincing him he will benefit from it. In Crona’s eyes the voice “Teaches him.” This is because he believes almost all the things his voice tells him. He is convinced because the voice is in his subconscious and it guides Crona to do what he would do if he freely had no morals. Crona’s emotions play a big roll in what his voice would say. For an example, after Crona was tortured and locked in a room here would be the interaction with he and his voice. Crona is thrown into the house as he drags himself into the corner so he can sit up. He pants loudly from the cauterized wounds. As he blinks in and out of consciousness he begins to hear something. “Wake up child. This is Brittle’s doing Crow. Get up Crow.” Crona attempts to drag himself to a sitting position almost ignoring the voice due to his pain. He grits his teeth as he moves. “Kill him Crow. He is corrupt. Alex showed you to kill the corrupt.” Crona thinks about Alex, the rebel he fought by. Alex had later killed himself. This flares up Crona’s anger even more as he gets to a knee and moves slowly towards the door. He taps the door open and for the next fifteen minutes he crawls up to a drunken Brittle’s room. Inside he hears Brittle and his lover arguing about alcohol. Crona then feels a large jolt in his side. Looking down he sees his throwing knife. With an expression of hatred, Crona removes the throwing knife from its sheath and taps the door. Luckily it is open and Crona stands up his legs wobbling. The rest is a blur in Crona’s mind. He was killed. This shows how Crona’s anger affected the voice and how he did not care what the voice did or said for his emotions had taken over. He didn’t doubt the voice was real or fake but, he knew what he wanted and the voice told it to him. As you notice the voice calls Crona “Crow.” This is an alias the Brittle man gave to Crona and is also what he is called by the members of the group. Ever since he had accepted the name, he looked at Crows as friends or brothers. The voice always refers to Crona as an actual crow. This is because Crona watches the simple and happy life of the birds in envy. Wishing slightly to be a crow. The voice takes his thoughts to extremes like this. Due to having the Bipolar Disorder Crona’s schizophrenia takes his emotions to extremes causing him to commit criminal actions during his Bipolar manias (episodes). As Crona begins to use the voice to amplify his thoughts and to his beliefs, give him advice to what he should do (like kill Brittle in the example above). Since Crona thinks that he learns and takes advice from the voice, he accepts the generic title of master although, it is more likely taking on the name of a person in Crona’s past such as Alitaus or Brittle. “Master” has begun giving Crona more and more advice from what Crona can see. The inner paranoia is leading the voice to tell Crona things such as that he should trust no one or that a certain person is corrupt and Crona should never listen to them. These things are causing Crona to believe the world is turning against him. [in Athera] With The Reagents of the Mask split up, Crona finds himself in denial. "The Reagents are just playing hide and seek." Corvo and Brittle, the old leaders, are just pranking him in his mind. He scowers Athera for the lost members, hoping to one day reunite them so things can go back to the way they were with his old master Brittle. He joins two new groups. The Ravens and The Invictus to give him purpose until he finds the Reagents. After finding one of the members, "Harbinger", his old friend tries to explain to him that the Reagents are gone and Crona's searches have been for nothing. Crona responds with extreme sadness, anger, and denial. Without the Reagents he is purposeless. Crona ran off and continues to search around Athera for the rest of his old group. [size="3"]Artwork[/size] None so far but willing to pay in minas for some good quality stuff. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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