[✓] Soul Puppetry [Lore Collective] + [Rewrite]

[E__V__O 1984]

On 9/19/2017 at 8:24 AM, Ballad2k said:

How many rewrites until there's no more rewrites

 

This is the first Soul Puppetry rewrite.

 

Edit:

Trying to get someone to help.

 

Edit (3:45pm 10/8/2017):

 

Grammar edits done.

Working on sentence structure.

 

Edit (1:24am 10/10/2017):

 

Sentence Structure done.

Added: Different affect to performing non malicious curses under 'backfire'.

Added: The abilities this lore gives users of the magic under "conclusion".

[FreeHongKong 934]

Thank you for submitting your piece! This is now under review and you can expect a verdict in roughly a week.

[FreeHongKong 934]

This lore is pending, you will be contacted regarding the issues raised by the lore team so you may fix it. You have 2 weeks to make the changes, beginning from when you are contacted. Once you have edited your piece, send me a forum PM and your piece will be reviewed to ensure the changes have been made.

[E__V__O 1984]

On 10/19/2017 at 5:25 PM, Dunstan said:

This lore is pending

 

Edited by request of adding in some role-play guidelines on how to extract biological blueprints. This isn't all of the million ways someone can do such. They're however some.

 

Listed in "CONCLUSION" under; 

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Role-play Guidelines:

 

If the MT have anything else further to discuss, send me a message.

[Elennanore 2709]

I didn't read any of this post and I don't know how mana works but +1 anyways. 

[NotEvilAtAll 9926]

On 8/14/2017 at 9:23 AM, Evocress said:

Halfling - Halflings are little stout rambunctious shits make the puppet just like that.

Someone doesn't like halflings... other than that this is a pretty good lore post, I approve of it.

[Parker 389]

39 minutes ago, NotEvilAtAll said:

Someone doesn't like halflings... other than that this is a pretty good lore post, I approve of it.

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thanks, thats my guide!

[E__V__O 1984]

As I wait for a verdict, I edited a simple change to the word "Good Curses" and reworded any where mentioned that stated such to "Good Boons". This is to assist in giving people an ideology that you can just work with a good variation of the magic and assist people in separating a difference between puppeteers.

 

As confirmation, No Lore was changed. 

[Samsan99 274]

Very nice changes. +1

[GodEmperorFlam 3447]

This Lore has been accepted. Moved to Implemented Lore, it will be sorted to it's appropriate category soon.