E__V__O 1984 Author Share Posted September 19, 2017 On 9/19/2017 at 8:24 AM, Ballad2k said: How many rewrites until there's no more rewrites This is the first Soul Puppetry rewrite. Edit: Trying to get someone to help. Edit (3:45pm 10/8/2017): Grammar edits done. Working on sentence structure. Edit (1:24am 10/10/2017): Sentence Structure done. Added: Different affect to performing non malicious curses under 'backfire'. Added: The abilities this lore gives users of the magic under "conclusion". Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
FreeHongKong 934 Share Posted October 12, 2017 Thank you for submitting your piece! This is now under review and you can expect a verdict in roughly a week. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
FreeHongKong 934 Share Posted October 19, 2017 This lore is pending, you will be contacted regarding the issues raised by the lore team so you may fix it. You have 2 weeks to make the changes, beginning from when you are contacted. Once you have edited your piece, send me a forum PM and your piece will be reviewed to ensure the changes have been made. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
E__V__O 1984 Author Share Posted October 25, 2017 On 10/19/2017 at 5:25 PM, Dunstan said: This lore is pending Edited by request of adding in some role-play guidelines on how to extract biological blueprints. This isn't all of the million ways someone can do such. They're however some. Listed in "CONCLUSION" under; Quote Role-play Guidelines: If the MT have anything else further to discuss, send me a message. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elennanore 2713 Share Posted October 27, 2017 I didn't read any of this post and I don't know how mana works but +1 anyways. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NotEvilAtAll 9926 Share Posted October 29, 2017 On 8/14/2017 at 9:23 AM, Evocress said: Halfling - Halflings are little stout rambunctious shits make the puppet just like that. Someone doesn't like halflings... other than that this is a pretty good lore post, I approve of it. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parker 389 Share Posted October 29, 2017 39 minutes ago, NotEvilAtAll said: Someone doesn't like halflings... other than that this is a pretty good lore post, I approve of it. 0 Upvote thanks, thats my guide! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
E__V__O 1984 Author Share Posted November 1, 2017 As I wait for a verdict, I edited a simple change to the word "Good Curses" and reworded any where mentioned that stated such to "Good Boons". This is to assist in giving people an ideology that you can just work with a good variation of the magic and assist people in separating a difference between puppeteers. As confirmation, No Lore was changed. 2 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samsan99 274 Share Posted November 3, 2017 Very nice changes. +1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodEmperorFlam 3447 Share Posted December 21, 2017 This Lore has been accepted. Moved to Implemented Lore, it will be sorted to it's appropriate category soon. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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