captrivside 14 Share Posted October 16, 2017 (edited) The Phantoms BY: captrivside The Phantoms (not a ghost) ancient protectors of life that in the recent years have returned. A Phantom's sworn duty is to protect the innocent no matter what. They have genetically been advanced a bit too do the job their senses are raised and their eyesight is a bit better. If a Phantom breaks their duty by killing or hurting someone the Prime Phantom will decide. If the die or will have their ability as a phantom ripped away from them either for life a certain period of time. A Prime Phantom is the leader of the Phantoms until he either dies or resigns. Or are kicked from the rank after the date of 200 years of being a Prime Phantom. If a Prime Phantom does not resign passed the date of 200 years of Prime leadership the phantoms will have to threaten them to resign or to kill them. The present Prime Taltic Van Hall formerly known as Teal’Ugluk is the first Phantom to be born for over hundreds of years. Before the people of Vailor moved to The Isles of Axois The Phantoms existed. They were different back then they did not protect they did the right thing in a large scale way. When They just learned language the Phantoms fought wars against what was and truly a threat to peace. They had no allies because their allies could have tried something bad and the Phantoms would of have to weaken them or kill them. They were lead by “Grand Empress Xyvire” she and her Phantoms eventually died off. With the rest of the original Axois races which composed of Oren, Orc, Elf, and Pale knights The Phantoms then had all races in their ranks. Xyvire became a powerful spirit and chose Taltic to be a Prime Phantom. But they did the right thing on a large scale just under that they sacrificed and brutally murdered many. This is a reason that they didn't make a come back for such a long time. To become a Phantom you either must have the blood or be enlisted by the oath. A phantom would look very dark and cultist like buts only too blend into the shadows. Rules YOU must not ever kill or hurt an innocent or you Prime will suspend you or kill you To be Phantom YOU must have the blood or have done the Oath Do not get aggravated because someone insulted you for being a Phantom DO NOT kill a fellow Phantom you will be killed When a Prime tells you what to do do it if it's against the rules tell some other Phantoms It is highly preferred that you wear your mask on duty Edited October 17, 2017 by captrivside Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lhindir_ 3436 Share Posted October 17, 2017 creatures with the name 'Phantom' already technically exist, something swgr wrote a while back. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
excited 10833 Share Posted October 17, 2017 If an Emperor is female they're an Empress. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
captrivside 14 Author Share Posted October 17, 2017 1 minute ago, Heathenry said: If an Emperor is female they're an Empress. 0 Upvote Oh your right damn it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scuba 281 Share Posted October 17, 2017 7 hours ago, Heathenry said: If an Emperor is female they're an Empress. 0 Upvote 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
HortonHeardAWho 243 Share Posted October 17, 2017 I suggest you check what you write on grammar.com, re-read it yourself, or have someone else read it for you. (Aka I'm saying you have tons of grammar errors and they're really easy to spot) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sporadic 2799 Share Posted October 20, 2017 This lore is thematically contradictory and overlaps with currently existing lore in a way that makes accepting this a difficult task. You cannot simultaneously be a spirit, genetically distinct and born at random from all of the descendants. If you are intent on pursuing this, I would recommend to begin by starting a player faction: One that doesn't have accepted lore but has the same main goal: to protect the innocent no matter what. And once your faction becomes popular and has dedicated, active backing, you will find it easier to get your lore accepted. You will also have a more thorough knowledge of the LotC lore and community at that point. Best of luck. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodEmperorFlam 3447 Share Posted October 28, 2017 Apologies, there seems to have been a miscommunication with pinging this thread when it was originally put under review. A verdict will be posted in a day or so. Sorry for the confusion! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
FreeHongKong 934 Share Posted October 29, 2017 This Lore has been denied. Topic moved to Denied Lore forum. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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