OzYmandi 647 Share Posted October 25, 2017 The document is too good so I'll just leave the link here. Comments are to be made here, though. https://docs.google.com/document/d/15V3Q45vJ-NzdNnbLM1j-s-dyVZ282SvyQENPr1FDMhc/edit Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gallic 1051 Share Posted October 25, 2017 Now, just reading the first few paragraphs of what Shadow Fiends are... Is that not already what an apparition or poltergeist is? Down to the feelings of unhappiness and coldness. The powers of the first two, too, do very little that those two spooks can't already do. I dunno if that'd actually be a problem, though, considering we have lots of overlap in the dark side of things anyway. Dreadknights, Paleknights, Muscle Liches, Spook-flavored Muyakelg can all do the same things, just with different flavors ( and to be fair, different niche powers ). It's still worth thinking about. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzYmandi 647 Author Share Posted October 25, 2017 32 minutes ago, TheCritsyBear said: Now, just reading the first few paragraphs of what Shadow Fiends are... Is that not already what an apparition or poltergeist is? Down to the feelings of unhappiness and coldness. The powers of the first two, too, do very little that those two spooks can't already do. I dunno if that'd actually be a problem, though, considering we have lots of overlap in the dark side of things anyway. Dreadknights, Paleknights, Muscle Liches, Spook-flavored Muyakelg can all do the same things, just with different flavors ( and to be fair, different niche powers ). It's still worth thinking about. 0 Upvote Yea, I thought of the similarity to poltergeists and apparitions, but I thought they brought the uniquiness that is having an actual corporeal form and being able to interact with the world, unlike ghosts/apparitions/poltergeists. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mavromino 513 Share Posted October 25, 2017 Gimme I want to be cool shadowy edgelord. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
E__V__O 1984 Share Posted October 25, 2017 You say given a soul, is this a soul shadow? ;) 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzYmandi 647 Author Share Posted October 25, 2017 1 minute ago, Evocress said: You say given a soul, is this a soul shadow? ;) 0 Upvote Nice joke. But no, an actual soul, if you're asking for real lmfao. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altarael 64 Share Posted October 25, 2017 I really don't understand the logic. Where do these things come from? Are they powered by something? Are they just natural phenomena? 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
E__V__O 1984 Share Posted October 25, 2017 9 minutes ago, Brazilianski said: Nice joke. But no, an actual soul, if you're asking for real lmfao. I was being semi-serious but now you have curiosity. Here is the current lore for souls: Soul Link 1 Soul Link 2 To run down: A Superior soul is what the descendants(including Kha)/Dragons/Other Intelligent beings have. This soul has a soul blueprint. A Lesser soul are usually beasts, creatures and various things. They do not have a soul blueprint. A shadow soul are what creations have, be them undead, homunculi, ext. Usually creatures that are affected by gold. What soul would you put the category of these shadow fiends? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzYmandi 647 Author Share Posted October 25, 2017 21 minutes ago, Evocress said: I was being semi-serious but now you have curiosity. Here is the current lore for souls: Soul Link 1 Soul Link 2 To run down: A Superior soul is what the descendants(including Kha)/Dragons/Other Intelligent beings have. This soul has a soul blueprint. A Lesser soul are usually beasts, creatures and various things. They do not have a soul blueprint. A shadow soul are what creations have, be them undead, homunculi, ext. Usually creatures that are affected by gold. What soul would you put the category of these shadow fiends? 0 Upvote Lesser Soul. 23 minutes ago, Ankathia said: I really don't understand the logic. Where do these things come from? Are they powered by something? Are they just natural phenomena? 0 Upvote Huskers and Stalkers are Natural phenomena, as they can or cannot happen from a site where a mass killing or a barbaric accident happened (I.e.: Shadow Fiends from Johannesburg Explosion) If by powered you mean their composition, they are mainly composed out of ectoplasm. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
FreeHongKong 934 Share Posted October 26, 2017 I can tell you right now its not getting accepted while it only exists as a google doc. Please suffer the forums lack of formatting ability if you would like to be reviewed. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
gameingg 603 Share Posted October 26, 2017 I thought it said "shadow friends" and they were friendly shadows, I'm dissapointed ;/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sporadic 2799 Share Posted October 28, 2017 I dunno... it seems way to similar to a Graven/Apparition hybrid form to really deserve its own lore segment. I appreciate that there are subtle differences, but the added complexity of having yet another of these ghost-like beings exist in lore just doesn't feel justified for he few tweaks you get from it. Maybe the Haunter can work if written as magic addition lore for the Necromancy/Mysticism branch of things. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzYmandi 647 Author Share Posted October 29, 2017 On 28/10/2017 at 12:51 PM, Sporadic said: I dunno... it seems way to similar to a Graven/Apparition hybrid form to really deserve its own lore segment. I appreciate that there are subtle differences, but the added complexity of having yet another of these ghost-like beings exist in lore just doesn't feel justified for he few tweaks you get from it. Maybe the Haunter can work if written as magic addition lore for the Necromancy/Mysticism branch of things. 0 Upvote It's an honest question... If I do speak with the LM's of Necromancy and Mysticism and actually post a magic addition binding Mysticism and Necromancy to create something, would the LT take time to actually read it because I think that a Mystic-Necromancy hybrid is different from, say, a wraith re-write. I've been getting a lot of people sayin' that 'Oh no, you won't get accepted, wraiths just got a re-write and LM's are gassing Undead apps'. So, I'd like to know if the LT would consider that addition. Danke. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sporadic 2799 Share Posted October 30, 2017 On 29/10/2017 at 5:03 PM, Brazilianski said: It's an honest question... If I do speak with the LM's of Necromancy and Mysticism and actually post a magic addition binding Mysticism and Necromancy to create something, would the LT take time to actually read it because I think that a Mystic-Necromancy hybrid is different from, say, a wraith re-write. I've been getting a lot of people sayin' that 'Oh no, you won't get accepted, wraiths just got a re-write and LM's are gassing Undead apps'. So, I'd like to know if the LT would consider that addition. Danke. 0 Upvote Well we would read it. I myself have made it my task to read and review every single Lore Submission, as you can probably tell. Can I guarantee anyone would vote Yes? Of course not. I don't even guarantee I would vote yes I dont even get a vote on magic stuff. However, magic additions recently have had reasonably high acceptance rates, so it's certainly possible. Perhaps PM someone from the Magic Sect first with your concept. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzYmandi 647 Author Share Posted October 30, 2017 6 hours ago, Sporadic said: Well we would read it. I myself have made it my task to read and review every single Lore Submission, as you can probably tell. Can I guarantee anyone would vote Yes? Of course not. I don't even guarantee I would vote yes I dont even get a vote on magic stuff. However, magic additions recently have had reasonably high acceptance rates, so it's certainly possible. Perhaps PM someone from the Magic Sect first with your concept. 0 Upvote That gives me a lot more confidence to go about and write it. For now, I'll self-deny and put down the Shadow Fiends to actually sit down with an MT from both Necromancy and Mysticism and have the Haunters written, if possible. Thanks for the help. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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