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[✗] [Lore Submission] The All Father's Gift


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7 minutes ago, ThatGuy_777 said:

This is honestly really interesting and unique. While not the most extravagant magic, it provides a lot of versatility without overstepping itself. And besides, RP ain't fun if you can just stroll around leisurely eviscerating your foes.

I've always felt a bit guilty about All-Fatherism getting the short end of the stick, despite the mass following. Definite +1 from me.

 

I prefer magic to be more realistic / gritty / mystical rather than scientific and extravagant. Makes it easier to immerse yourself.

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I distinctly remember a time when humans would outlaw the use of magic in their cities because it was gay or against the will of GOD

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I like this, it was an interesting read and would add more flavor and support like magic.. Also your font is unbearable to read.

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3 minutes ago, Tox said:

I like this, it was an interesting read and would add more flavor and support like magic.. Also your font is unbearable to read.

 

Italicized times new roman?

3 minutes ago, KiausT (The Alpha ****) said:

I distinctly remember a time when humans would outlaw the use of magic in their cities because it was gay or against the will of GOD

 

Red Faith = different religion than canonism, magic is still gay tho

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1 minute ago, Narthok said:

Italicized times new roman?

 

Yes, it was bothersome to read. Maybe Un-italicize it? Just a slight suggestion.

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+1, though due to Elle following Astrid I would like to make a suggestion. Instead of having one of her spells cause attraction, have it cause an increased arrow accuracy. In lore she's a symbol of honor and loyalty, as well as vengeance if I recall correctly because Beorn cheated on her so she slid an arrow into his heart while he slept. Having one of her spells make someone more attractive makes next to no sense in my opinion. Otherwise I liked it. 

 

If you don't like the arrow suggestion, she also tended to their farm so perhaps a spell relating to her that aids in crop growth or animal happiness.

 

Edit: Also Snow's spells should have to be sung AND accompanied by an instrument to be cast in my opinon. 

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2 hours ago, zaezae said:

No comments about 'too much magic!?'

 

Jk, it's p good.

 

Despite having an absolute ass ton of possible abilities, the ones you can actually access are very limited due to the quadrant and patron system. We needed a wide variety of spells because they are a very straight forward application. It isn't like fire evocation where you can be creative. Most prayers have a single very straight forward application, buff x or nerf y in z fashion. Hence we've tried to give users a wide variety of options while forcing them to make conscious decisions about what they want to specialize in. We're also reworking the spells atm.

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Wow, a nice read Narth. I like it!

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This is really interesting! I have been waiting for a magic like this that is mainly support.

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