character profile Alkheim's Orgin

[KrisTough 34]

Alkheim, of the house of Alsteim, the descendant of Alkheir, the Bowman, the Hunter, or among the creatures of war, the terror. Alkheim lived with his mother and father in the kingdom of Renatus. They dwelt in peace in this town for a long time. However, since an Orc settlement was close by, the Orcs had become more than a mere nuisance to traders and travelers, they were becoming a threat. Knowing that the Orcs and Goblins were both very warlike and territorial, Alkheir knew that it would start weighing heavily on the kingdom eventually if the trades were raided continuously. Alkheims father, Alkheir saw the grievance the Orcs, Goblins, creatures caused, so, he went to the king of Renatus, asking for permission to protect these traders and caravans. The king understood the reason for Alkheirs wants to do this; people were dying due to these constant raids. However, Alkheir reminded the kind of the house of Alsteim, that in the days of old, they protected the king, they were his elites. When the king found out that Alkheir was speaking the truth, he named the group the group of old, the rangers. It only seemed fitting, since the line had descended from the house of Alsteim, and they had practiced the skill for generations, still being amazing Bowmen, trackers, etc. When Alkheir had permission, he took his  men and created a group to defend the travelers and traders from the Orcs This made these creatures fearful of Alkheim the terror, but, they also hated him.Soon afterward, more Orcs began attacking these caravans of traders, knowing that if enough attacked, the defenders would be overwhelmed. The numbers of them were to great and Alkheims father perished, and the caravan was plundered. When Alkheim heard of this, he grieved greatly,  he gathered many of his friends who were warriors or archers as himself. Being a successful tracker, he tracked down the murderous Orcs and attacked with his men. Unfortunately, the Orcs were too strong for them, they slaughtered his friends and injured him greatly. Alkheim barely escaped with his life. After healing himself and fully recovering from the wounds inflicted upon him by the Orcs, he discovered that his face was mauled and scared, forcing him to hide his face in a deep cowl. Alkheim did not desire to live in a kingdom with so many sad memories, he wandered about, trying to uphold justice, and running from the tragic sorrows of his memories. Never would Alkheim forget the deeds that the Orcs committed.

Give me any suggestions, do you like it, should I add something. I would like the lore team to look at this to see if there are any lore errors. Also, maybe adding some lore to the house of Alsteim.

Edited May 4, 2018 by Beorn15

[Areln 199]

18 minutes ago, Beorn15 said:

house of Alsteim

Woah our chars r almost last name buddies spooky

[z3m0s 1771]

Formating (For the record, I am your first +1 ever) Less than three

[KrisTough 34]

5 minutes ago, z3m0s said:

Formating (For the record, I am your first +1 ever) Less than three

What do you mean by formatting? Is there a special format I need to do?

 

[z3m0s 1771]

46 minutes ago, Beorn15 said:

What do you mean by formatting? Is there a special format I need to do?

 

No particular format at all, just making things look nice, this is something I did ages ago. . . Not particularly the best, but it looks more appealing when you make posts like it. Add a picture and perhaps a theme song, along with colored headers, etc etc you get more people sticking around to read and +1 if you care about that stuff

 

Probably ignore most of the actual writing as its pretty memey but that should help a little ❤️ Nice post

[Slothtastic 760]

Grrrrr... as an Orc I am offended by you saying there was another Orc settlement nearby! Also Renatus and Orcs are allies 

[KrisTough 34]

Well, its the story, sorry.