Booklight12 477 Share Posted August 15, 2019 Looks cool only thing I'd say is remove the asphixiation aspect. As previously stated a spell like a bubble of water or bubble of air around the head of an individual with the goal to suffocate, drown, asphixiate an individual has always been in the redlines for both water and air evocation due to the easily powergameable nature of it. Besides this i really like the lore post and like the aesthetic of it. Good work bud. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustMeMorgan 1000 Author Share Posted August 16, 2019 (edited) It takes 3 emotes at T5 to create and requires a person to be essentially still, that way I could say it’s pretty balanced, it’s not that easy to powergame when it specifically defines the person cannot move more than 2 block per emote which basically means they would have to be restrained to use it tl;dr if a guy lets you spend 3 emotes casting a spell on them without moving a single block they deserve to drown It also makes no sense that it wouldn’t work like that, I mean, it’s magic sure but, magic still has a physical presence meaning no 2 things can be in the same place therefore if you have a bubble of water, no air is getting in... Edited August 16, 2019 by LorelessPuddleMancer Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScreamingDingo 16990 Share Posted September 9, 2019 Hello @LorelessPuddleMancer Post is here to confirm that you have gathered all the feedback necessary for your lore and wish to proceed with the reviewing process. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustMeMorgan 1000 Author Share Posted September 9, 2019 Yep @ScreamingDingo Thanks Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScreamingDingo 16990 Share Posted September 9, 2019 Thank you for submitting your piece! It is now under review, a verdict will be given within a few weeks. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScreamingDingo 16990 Share Posted September 17, 2019 This lore has been denied as per this thread: click me. 2 weeks were given to reformat and correct the submission to match the current criteria, which were not done. If you believe this is a mistake (as this was a big sweep, yours may have been overlooked), please contact me over the forums here: click me. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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