[✗] [CA Race Lore] - Homunculi

[Beordan 213]

format aside this lore took a real long time and turned out pretty well 

 

big thanks to all the people that helped along the way

[ScreamingDingo 16792]

Another day another denial

[Statherian 3314]

@OtakuPan It is time.

[Citrines 20]

This turned out great, nice job!

[Vermy 1346]

Even the skin alone wants me to play one right away .  +1

[NotAPan 459]

On 8/3/2019 at 5:33 PM, Rave_Cave_marb said:

@OtakuPan It is time.

This calls for a return

Edited August 4, 2019 by OtakuPan

[JuniperSelkie 241]

Here’s my big question. For people who already knew how to make Homunculi, does this give them that ability again?

[𝙻𝚞𝚟 XO 3062]

spod you did an amazing job with this lore and your writing is littyyyyyyy

 

good job my pal +1

[ScreamingDingo 16792]

Hello @SpodoKaiba

Post is here to confirm that you have gathered all the feedback necessary for your lore and wish to proceed with the reviewing process.

[SpodoKaiba 607]

2 hours ago, ScreamingDingo said:

Hello @SpodoKaiba

Post is here to confirm that you have gathered all the feedback necessary for your lore and wish to proceed with the reviewing process.

Yup

[ScreamingDingo 16792]

Thank you for submitting your piece! It is now under review, a verdict will be given within a few weeks.

[ScreamingDingo 16792]

This lore has been denied

 

The team found quite a few complications in regards to being able to “re-spec” during combat and the number grade system. There were calculations done where you were able to have olog strength AND move 20 blocks in a single emote, this is unacceptable with any creature and shows the inherent flaws that went through this piece.

 

The thematic content of the piece was honestly a nice, refreshing take from the homunculi at all. But a majority of the perks and quirks of these creatures were highly abusable in CRP and would lead to countless forms of powergaming. We do encourage freedom within pieces, but not THIS much freedom.