Ants endless wars [Poem]

[adamc2000 1162]

[ just bored and made a poem bout ants thought share it with you all,

also to all those still fighting in this war which still has no name i think? remember to just have fun and try not to take everything ooc!

anyways her it is!]

Ants endless wars

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I swear my allegiance

And sharpen my jaw

I beg farewell

For I might not see the morn’

And should I see the morn’

I will not come back the same

For the field is covered
In lines of my dead comrade

For we came in defense
Of my home, my friends, my queen
Against the army i’m facing

Straight across from me

And here we shall stand
And here I shall die
Upon this stone road
I will Lie
For I love My Colony
More then my life

And it was he who killed me
This I know

But my fellow brothers of war shall avenge me

Of this i’m sure

For no Ant leaves

Until each is avenged

For each of our brothers that die

We shall take ten more

And so upon this endless war I lie
Until my young generation comes

To take me away

To the great graveyard I go

Like my ancestors have

And be Visited and honored

By those after me
But in this endless war we shall survive

For I don’t die in vain

For in anguish my sons cry

”For you I to shall die!”

And so they will go to my queen

And swear allegiance

And join the great struggle

For they to may suffer my fate

For the endless wars await.

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Please tell me what you think and leave a like! advice is always welcome and I hope you all are having fun!

 

[TH3GHOSTWAFFL3 489]

Nice little poem here.

[adamc2000 1162]

6 hours ago, TH3GHOSTWAFFL3 said:

Nice little poem here.

Thanks! any advise for me?

 

[TH3GHOSTWAFFL3 489]

21 hours ago, adamc2000 said:

Thanks! any advise for me?

 

 

@adamc2000 most of my poems are in a very different form to this one, so I’m not really qualified to offer any proper feedback. Ultimately, poetry is from the heart, so free-form poems such as this one are very hard to give feedback on. I’d love to see you write more!