TDubs 190 Share Posted April 14, 2020 RIP Snow Elves. 21 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zacho 1733 Share Posted April 14, 2020 im not mad, im a bit confused but mostly impressed. one thing I did notice was the long redline for one of the spells and how that’ll be nearly unmanagable to remember every single interaction. I’d suggest finding a way to deduce it down lower. 3 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueJay 21 Share Posted April 14, 2020 Yesss, bardmancy! Love the lore, love the magic effects (and frazzle), and love the Amphitheatre 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
tgrt 743 Share Posted April 14, 2020 A type of magic that focuses on fun, easy, player-run events, interesting characters and THE FREAKING POWER OF MUSIC? Yep. Yep yep. Yep yep yep 4 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TDubs 190 Author Share Posted April 14, 2020 On 4/13/2020 at 10:36 PM, Zacho said: im not mad, im a bit confused but mostly impressed. one thing I did notice was the long redline for one of the spells and how that’ll be nearly unmanagable to remember every single interaction. I’d suggest finding a way to deduce it down lower. Would pointing out the spells it does not effect be a better approach? Or group up the ones with similar buffs/diminishes? (4/16/2020) EDIT: I have just reduced the amount of text. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chorale__ 1691 Share Posted April 14, 2020 I ended up skimming the post, but I was so interested that I eventually scrolled back up and read every single word. Very nicely done, could be a little bit better written, some things were a bit confusing but I do not have the energy to point them out at the moment. Overall, great work though. +1 3 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DahStalker 2839 Share Posted April 14, 2020 Not a fan, but gl 2 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TDubs 190 Author Share Posted April 17, 2020 On 4/14/2020 at 2:01 AM, PiousChorale_ said: I ended up skimming the post, but I was so interested that I eventually scrolled back up and read every single word. Very nicely done, could be a little bit better written, some things were a bit confusing but I do not have the energy to point them out at the moment. Overall, great work though. Pleeeeeeeease when you have some time point out the things that confused you. Would really appreciate any help. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slayy 816 Share Posted April 17, 2020 Barely skimming through it, it has some promising spells and mechanics yet it still needs to be worked on a bit. +1 for trying! 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merkaken 516 Share Posted May 3, 2020 Ah, I remember making magic like this way back when. And then getting it shelved by the LT after it was accepted. Good times. Yours is much more fleshed out, however. Hopefully it gets accepted and stays that way. Good luck. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TDubs 190 Author Share Posted May 4, 2020 15 hours ago, Merkaken said: Ah, I remember making magic like this way back when. And then getting it shelved by the LT after it was accepted. Good times. Yours is much more fleshed out, however. Hopefully it gets accepted and stays that way. Good luck. I have all the old versions of this magic bookmarked so I could try an learn from their missteps and reasons for why it got shelved. I thank you for making your version back then. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
squakhawk 7299 Share Posted September 26, 2020 This lore has been denied. You will be sent a forum PM regarding the reasons for denial within the next 24 hours. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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