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[✗] [CA Race Lore]-The Izkuthii


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7 minutes ago, drtrollado said:

this sucks, admins please ban him

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Honestly, this is a very nice attempt at simplifying, adding flavor and making sense of the already complicated and tricky nature of Izkuthii lore – The original spell list is quite convoluted and rp-unfriendly already. I think this version of it could bring some neat possibilities on the right hands!

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Changelog:

-Fixed Formatting Errors

-Removed Amayo’s Art

-Added more options for Specialisation Marks

-Removed Craftery Conning

-Removed Cloaking

-Removed Miracle

-Added 18th card to Deck of Wonders

-Changed Illusionary World to require RO consent for Zones on a property not owned by the Izkuthii

-Removed Mocking Masks

-Removed Blinding Deck

-General Clarification and Elaboration, making sure everything is understandable and clear

 

Edited by GodEatingCommie
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While I do not know much about the original lore I do find this write up to give fairly interesting topics for roleplay and well as a fairly neat race in of it’s self. While I dont see a need for a whole CA wipe I do still potential in this as a whole. I do not feel right criticizing something I had not had  a grasp of before hand, but I can certainly say this is a nice attempt at a ‘new’ Creature player race as a whole. 

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Before I say anything I would like to say that I never had an Izkuthii or was apart of the Izkuthii culture, so I am coming at this at a player perspective. I can agree that this lore piece is like a Jig-Saw puzzle as its really fleshed out. Every single detail and ability Izkuthii possess has atleast a paragraph behind it and a couple of Redlines more or less. It makes the piece complicated as everything said had an affect/plays along with another detail or ability, It also makes it mildly confusing aswell. Anyways, from the time I’ve spent on LOTC I have met two Izkuthii and I have deemed them pretty rare where of they are almost non-existent. I can see that this lore implements a way for Izkuthii to come back to have more players interact with them is really good and the abilities, curses, details, etc are pretty unique and adds diversity like all races should on LOTC. However judging by the long complexity of it, it may take awhile for it to be reviewed and fixed. Though i’m excited to see where this can go if it picks up any traction. +1

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I was asked to review this piece looking for flaws and the such, and honestly as someone who hasn’t met anyone of this CA before it seems really interesting. I do not think I would make one just because of the complexity, but at the same time I would love to RP with people who did.

 

Now I’d like to point out the people who have hated on this project so far LOL They fall into one of two categories:

 

1 – People who don’t like the former playerbase of this CA

2 – People who are the former playerbase of this CA

 

Funny how that works :3 Anyway, I wanna wish Commie luck with this. Like the person above said, I doubt it will be accepted anytime soon, but it’s a far better and more fleshed-out idea than half the stuff we see on LOTC.

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