azdrazi [✓] [World Lore] [Lore Addition] Vehement Smithing & Draconic Artifice (Dracanium)

[Ryloth 4312]

17 minutes ago, Panashea said:

 

Yep, hope i didn't come across as condescending or spiteful, moreso just wanted to hash things out/explanations. Thanks for clearing up stuff for me 

 

Good luck on the submission

 

Naw I understand! Hopefully that all makes sense. Better to have player feedback than none at all, lol.

[Ryloth 4312]

Updated per pending status, see changelog, also shown below:

Spoiler

9/8/2021

• Added redlines restricting use of thanhium in draconic artifice enchantments on all enchantments due to conflicting lore. (Self-addition)
• Vehement Talisman has been removed.
• Rune of binding weapons & scabbards now require at minimum of 1 ingot each to forge before enchantment.
• Drakesflame bow is now an activatable enchantment with required tells and mechanics limitations. An example has also been added for clarity on techlock armaments emote requirements to avoid confusion.
• Added redlines requiring ST signatures on dragon bones, dralachite ore, and dracanium ingots.
• Added redlines requiring dates of extraction, collection or creation of dragon bones, dralachite, and dracanium. All items will also contain the species and name of the dragon for ST reference.
• Added examples of how items should be written and explained in their descriptions. Also added interaction examples for when the spirit is used in RP.
• Added a small reason for why dragons flame is required, including two redlines mentioning mundane & voidal fire, and malflame & holy fire and how they will react in forging.
• Added a redline on the requirement of dragon's blood and water when quenching, including an explanation for why.
• Increased the firelight charm usage time to 2 narrative hours.

 

[squakhawk 7298]

This Lore has been accepted. Moved to Implemented Lore, it will be sorted to it's appropriate category soon. Please note that if this is playable lore, such as a magic or CA, you will need to write a guide for this piece. You will be contacted regarding the guide (or implementation if it isn’t needed) shortly.