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THE NOBLE CITY OF ATRUS

‘Things Held in Common’

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Ideias criativas de pintura, Locais, Cidade

“They say Atrus is the wildflower of the south, watered by the piety of its late King John Casimir. Its petals bloom outward, inviting all to a place of refuge.”

Shalasannan Doxos, adventurer, reflecting on his time in the capital of Balian.

 

The cosmopolitan city of Atrus is known for its unique blend of Petrine, Rhenyari, and old Balianite influences. Its streets are lined with white-washed buildings adorned with colorful mosaics and intricate carvings, while the bustling markets offer a diverse array of goods from all corners of the southern continent. 

 

Given its location in the desert, Atrus boasts a Mediterranean-like climate with hot summers and mild winters. The city is surrounded by heavy dunes that are also home to a variety of exotic flora and fauna, making it a popular destination for hunters and adventurers. It is a place where old traditions and new ideas come together to cultivate a hardy and innovative society.

 

The Senate of Balian, a once proud institution made up of many former imperial bureaucrats, governed the city in the time of King John Casimir. However, over time, the Senate had grown stagnant and out of touch with the needs and concerns of the people. Seeing an opportunity to empower his people and revitalize his city, King Alexander chartered the First Commune of Atrus, a people's organization that would give the lazzari, or commons of Atrus, a political unit to band together and administer the desert city.

 

The First Commune of Atrus introduces the historic Gradic Rights to the people of Atrus, as well as empowering them to name among them a First Syndic and Vice-Syndic to lead their city. They are afforded the power to self-legislate through the Supreme Assembly of the Lazzari, and it is the King’s hope that these reforms lead to a more agile and dynamic city administration powered by the collective knowledge and expertise of its people. The motto of the First Commune is ‘Things Held in Common’ - a reminder that the wildflower of the south, Atrus, is a gift shared among its people.

 

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THE RIGHTS OF OUR ATRUS 

 

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The Lazzari of Atrus Enjoy The Kings Game

 

The Commune of Atrus is granted privileges under the Gradic Rights which outline their autonomy and freedom from serfdom. The Gradic Rights were given to the Imperial Free City of Felsen during the reign of John II, Holy Orenian Emperor which allowed for greater autonomy to the city through a series of municipal rights. These rights came from a series of laws which gave privileges to the burghers, exemption from serfdom, and the ability for self-governance and self-defense.

 

The Gradic Rights, c.1557

Hitherto the populace of this city shall be referred to as any legal landholder and their immediate family within municipal authority.

Hitherto does the populace of this city have the right to waive feudal privilege and govern itself.

Hence the city has the right to choose a leader from amongst its own.

Hence the city has the right to produce and publish laws and rights regarding itself.

Hitherto does the populace of this city have an exemption from serfdom.

Hitherto does the populace of this city have the right to freedom of travel.

Hitherto does the populace of this city have the right to collect tax, tolls, and impose fees.

Hitherto does the populace of this city have the right to freedom of trade.

Hitherto does the populace of this city have the right to a trial by judge.

Hitherto does the populace of this city have the right to petition its lord.

 

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THE GOVERNMENT OF OUR ATRUS

 

THE FIRST SYNDIC OF ATRUS

The First Syndic of Atrus serves as the head of the municipal government. They are elected by popular vote by the citizenry every four years, and are expected to appoint a Vice-Syndic to help manage their affairs, as well as up to three commissioners to tackle specific municipal challenges such as construction, event organization, the management of press and publication, or more.

 

Spoiler

This edict delegates to the First Syndic of Atrus the following competencies of the Municipal Government of the Commune of Atrus;

 

I. The First Syndic has been bestowed the responsibility to head the municipal government and delegate to relevant individuals by assigning them to a post within the government and sacking any unfit individuals from their post.

  1. The First Syndic is expected to name a Vice-Syndic to serve as his deputy in all matters of administration.

  2. The First Syndic is expected to name up to three commissioners in his government to aid him in specific departments of municipal service. This may include construction, the organization of fetes or other events and celebrations, management of the press and publications of the Commune, or more, depending on the changing needs of the people.

II. The First Syndic has been given the authority to veto any law, ordinance, statute, or amendment which has been passed by the Assembly of the Lazzari provided that said legislation does not have a two-thirds majority.

III. The First Syndic is hereby granted authority to banish any lowborn from the City of Atrus.

IV. The First Syndic is hereby granted authority to evict any convicted villain from the City of Atrus.

V. The First Syndic has been instructed to distribute alms and refuge to whomever is necessary in the City of Atrus.

 

THE SUPREME ASSEMBLY OF THE LAZZARI

The Supreme Assembly of the Lazzari acts as the collective representation for the citizenry of Atrus. There are six seats within the assembly filled by citizens of the city. The seats are chosen by lottery vote, headed by the Procurator’s office once every four years. 

 

The assembly functions as the legislative body of the city and is charged with the creation and amendment of law and judicial statutes. It is named after the lazzari, or commons, in the modern Balian tongue, and one who fills one of the seats of the Supreme Assembly may be addressed as Concio.

 

The commune is unique from other city governments in that while concios are the only ones that can propose a legislation to be voted on, the actual voting is done by all citizens of Atrus. In that way, while the concios guide and moderate discussion, all peoples of Atrus are enfranchised to vote on the bills that will affect them. A citizen of Atrus, is defined as someone who has lived in the city for more than two weeks, and has paid rent on a property in that time or served in one of its state institutions for that time.

 

Spoiler

This edict delegates to the Supreme Assembly of the Lazzari the following competencies of the Municipal Government of the First Commune of Atrus;

 

I. The Supreme Assembly of the Lazzari has been tasked with the creation of new laws, city ordinances, and statutes which must be passed with a vote of majority. As the Supreme Assembly replaces the body of the Senate, it serves as an interim legislative government for the kingdom as well. With dispensation of the Magister, they can also create new laws and statutes that apply to the kingdom - these laws would require royal assent.

II. The Supreme Assembly of the Lazzari has been tasked with the amendment of laws, city ordinances, and statutes which must be passed with a vote of majority.

III. The Supreme Assembly of the Lazzari is hereby granted charge over the City Charter of Atrus.

IV. The Supreme Assembly of the Lazzari is granted authority to amend the City Charter of Atrus with a vote of two-thirds majority.

V. The Supreme Assembly of the Lazzari has been tasked with approving the budget of the Municipal Government with a vote of majority.

VI. The Supreme Assembly of the Lazzari is granted the authority to sack any member of the municipal government with a vote of two-thirds majority.

VII. The Supreme Assembly of the Lazzari is hereby ordered to meet once every year in a meeting, and name a Grand Concio to serve as the speaker of the chamber for a four year term. 

VIII. The Grand Concio is responsible for moderating the discussion of the chamber and maintaining the decorum of the chamber, as well as tallying the votes of the lazzari. Together with the aid of the Censure they are responsible in ensuring all votes are legitimate.

 

THE CITY CLERK OF ATRUS

The City Clerk of the City of Atrus is appointed by the Procurator’s office and serves indefinitely until sacked by said office. They are the chief financial comptroller of the city, ensuring that royal dues are received to the Crown and chamber, and serve as the Crown’s representative in the city’s administration. If a City Clerk has proven inept, inactive, or otherwise corrupt, the Supreme Assembly can make a motion for impeachment on a two-thirds majority.

 

Spoiler

This edict delegates to the City Clerk of Atrus the following competencies of the Municipal Government of the City of Atrus;

 

I. The City Clerk has been instructed to keep record and overlook progress of construction and taxation within the City of Atrus.

II. The City Clerk has been tasked with the maintenance and safekeeping of the municipal ledger.

III. The City Clerk has been instructed to take note of the containments of the City of Atrus’ storage.

IV. The City Clerk has been instructed to appraise houses and set house prices and tax prices accordingly.

V. The City Clerk has been instructed to pay, supply the goods to, and manage building, construction, and the builders themselves in the City of Atrus

VI. The City Clerk has been instructed to pay wages, pay for supplies, and pay for the arms of the City Watch from municipal coffers.

VII. The City Clerk is hereby charged with fostering economic growth and the maintenance of the trade grounds within the City of Atrus.

VIII. The City Clerk has been given the power to order construction and demolition within the City of Atrus.

IX. The City Clerk is hereby tasked with creating a competent bureaucracy of clerks capable of servicing the City of Atrus.

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JOINING ATRUS

 

If the spirit of the concios and lazzari speak to you, then know that Atrus, the precious wildflower of the South, is open to all who seek honor, refuge, and peace. The city gates remain manned by Balian’s own military company, with a thriving and stable royal administration eager to welcome immigrants. 

 

Those interested in specific developments within the Commune should reach out to the Procurator’s Office, currently manned by Johanne Vuiller (@tadabug2000) for more information, or leave a reply expressing interest at the bottom of this notice.

 

At the moment, Atrus is seeking an interim Syndic to be appointed by the Crown to lead the first four weeks of government - after that, elections will commence as the commune’s political foundation is established. The first Assembly will also be appointed by the crown, with the first lottery being held two weeks into government. Those who would consider being part of the founding city government should reach out to the existing City Commission of Johanne Vuiller (@tadabug2000), Sarson of Helena (@Cracker), or Gaius Ruthern (@WaveLincoln)  for an interview.

 

The city is also experiencing a robust reconstruction project headed by the reputed architect Guillermo Rutledge. Previews of the illustrious build can be found below.

 

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[Credit to @VonAulusfor build and @Greenerfor screenshots]

 

For newcomers and veterans alike seeking a fresh opportunity, being part of the groundwork of the First Commune is an excellent opportunity to leave your mark on a realm ascendant. Join us today!

 

[Consider checking out our discord as well to get involved! https://discord.gg/UVnE9uYt8G

Announcements involving the interview process to become a concio, along with event and municipal updates can be found above.]

 

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Almeida reads the encyclical published by the Balianese government from his oubliette-like chambers in Valfleur, quietly longing for his homeland. At the time of his studies under Ferraz, the nature and purpose of a city government in Atrus had been a hotly-debated issue among the other academics at the Royal Balianese Academy. Now, Almeida was sorely interested to see that the realm of his birth had implemented the arcane Gradic Rights, the same principles that half-soused old Ferraz had prattled about for hours at his infamous 'educational dinners'. Where had such a stroke of literacy come from? Had the King finally deigned fit to listen to the Academy? He wasn't certain, but made it a private mission to find out.

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Ledicort Vuiller would peer over the missive from the Kingdom, a light, tired smile would grace his face as he sees the beginning of what he believes will be a bright future for his people "In hoc signio vinces" he would murmur lightly in memory of King John I 'The founder'.

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An old and retired politician, Cicero pokes his head up at the change Artus thinking to himself, "Maybe they might need a bit of my touch."

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The Prince of Balian would widen his eyes at the missive, hopeful to see what is to come from his home the City of Atrus. He then went about his day, spending his hours idly as any another child.

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The Countess of Aquilae and Procurator of Balian, one such Johanne Vuiller glanced the missive over as one leg crossed over the other, tapping at the page with a hum of thought. Who should she appoint to City Clerk? She'd prefer to have someone who wasn't idiotic, as is natural. A short list is made of potentials when the missive is settled down, in neat, consicive handwriting.

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Guillermo Rutledge, still languishing away under arms, without promotion, has been spending his time in the gatehouse doodling and sketching the future of the city. Guarding is important work but can put a man to sleep!

 

After his shift he would peer at the notice and take in the new form of government. "It is good to see some of humanity is building on top of Vesnian traditions. It is foolish to ignore systems that have worked in the past." However, he must make his way home to get to work on dinner. He though a light vegetable salad would be a good starter course. Imported Petran beef was too expensive at the market so he would have to settle for pork raised on the waste of the city. He wished now he had marinated the pork in some berries or Yong Pingish sauces.

 

Tomorrow he would venture to the square to get a fresh loaf of bread from the bakery. He had some jams that had been preserved from wild berries that grew around the city. 

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20 minutes ago, ErikAzog said:

The Prince of Balian would widen his eyes at the missive, hopeful to see what is to come from his home the City of Atrus. He then went about his day, spending his hours idly as any another child.

 

The youngest of the King's brood, Princess Lydia, would peek over her brother's shoulder with great childish scrutiny. She did not care for the color of that one wall...nor the way that desert hedge had been trimmed! For the rest of the afternoon, the littlest Balain pestered her royal father with questions and concerns that only a child's mind would have!

 

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The Baron of Marsana, Gaius Rosius var Ruthern, reads the missive with a small smile upon his lips. This was part of his first task as attaché to the Lord Seneschal: help the city commission revitalize Atrus, the shining capital of Balian. "I can niet wait to see what the future holds for our nation! So far we are going down a dobry path of revitalization.", the young Lord would murmur. He then returned back to his desk and resumed his work; going over a list of possible candidates for the assembly. 

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